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When Johnny Came Marching Home

I watched as Johnny was handed a uniform Saw him trained him to kill, in a regiment conform Marched by his side in Vietnam jungles warm There was little regard to how war did us harm By parachute dropped to a ghastly death scene Johnny ached for the life left behind, so serene His family, fiancé did not know what war means Especially the haunting of lost children's screams No ticker-tape parades, no welcome for us then We were scorned as monsters, baby-killing men Jeers from protestors and an uncaring government Greeted the lonely Vietnam Veteran No accolades received from a nation displeased But we had not asked to be sent overseas The rich sent their sons to universities For families with wealth dodging the draft was a breeze The "benefits" we found would astound all now Homeless Vietnam vets still dwell amongst the crowd And it leaves one to wonder how our hallowed ground Could have so many unnamed graves of men once proud I still see vets suffering disgraceful neglect To say Vietnam wasn’t “war” shows no respect by Carolyn Devonshire for Miranda Lambert's "World of War: Vietnam" contest

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Date: 4/28/2011 5:26:00 PM
Hard subject to revisit you did a great job. Light & Love
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Date: 4/24/2011 5:25:00 AM
Many congratulations Carolyn on your win in Miranda's fine contest, Happy Easter....:)
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:35:00 AM
Great to see you in the winner's circle Carolyn. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM Win in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on this exceptional write, Carolyn. Well written containing truth, with perfect iamgery and flow. Happy Easter, girl! Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:39:00 PM
a well thought out verse and deserving of far higher placing in this contest Carolyn....most moving part was the lost children's screams....of course there were such children in all wars but in Vietbam we saw them on tv vividly....
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Date: 4/21/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:22:00 PM
Carolyn, I enjoyed everything about this poem. From the title, especially the stanza about the rich folks evading their responsibilities by dodging the draft. You are certainly on your mark when you sarcastically remind the readers of the "benefits" gained by the unappreciated and often homeless Vets. I try to make every Vet feel appreciated whenever I come into contact with them through my work. Best wishes for this reality-based poem! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:31:00 AM
A battle lost, and a country hollowed out by the fruits of a lie. Out of sight and out mind were the Viet Nam vets, but the country wore their shame anyway. Good luck in the contest Carolyn.
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:00:00 PM
good call, i am with you in that we didnt do enough for our men in uniform..
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:24:00 AM
carols, i hope you're having a great time though i'm missing you already! soup mail..:)
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:22:00 AM
Quite a riveting write with so much truth Carolyn I especially love you last two lines.. Will definitely come up with a heart write for you :) love and enjoy the fishing, Happy Easter to you too :) Wilma
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:23:00 AM
Carolyn, your words bring alive the fallout of war...... winning wishes for the contest. Much thanks for encouraging comments on my work, 'seeing way in others eye' & 'turned down heaven'. Poetry is a creative baby of poet. Tying down in a 'form' is like expecting everyone to produce identical babies. Nothing against contests. Win or no win is not primary aim. Larger aim to enjoy ones creation !!! As an artist I do so more with words...Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:32:00 PM
I have a few friends dead and a brother who is having trouble walking (land mine). We were lied to by the government and we were expendable to them. There was a lot more than agent orange used over there and the A$$holes we have in Washington now still lie until the guilty have all had their successful lives. Good luck in the contest. Vince
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Date: 4/15/2011 2:59:00 PM
I mean't to say i think this is a sensitive yet questioning write Carolyn, it should do well in the contest!
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Date: 4/15/2011 2:53:00 PM
I think this is a sensitive yet questioning write Carolyn, i should it do well in the contest!
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Date: 4/15/2011 1:40:00 PM
THanks for your comment on my poem "ode to my dog" I was just fooling around, but it soumded pretty good. Good luck in the contest and God bless you, Jancarl
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:22:00 AM
It was the same in Australia we had the demonstrations demanding our boys return. No real recognition for our changed men, returned from the horror they saw.
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:10:00 AM
Hey Carolyn, such a moving poem. I had a brother in law that served in the military during the vietnam era he did not have to fight in nam but he was mistreated just the same when he came back. It is sad. He had no choice in the matter.
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:51:00 PM
excellent way to see it. To show how the soldier once again was the one who lost out in all this. I really like your poem for this contest. As for my cinquain you commented on, I wish I were talking of a real person when I wrote that!
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Date: 4/14/2011 4:56:00 PM
As you informed me about your cousin, it made me with feelings to read the truie account of the viet war, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2011 4:37:00 PM
I weas so lucky that my son was assigned to certified confidential work and kept in an office and served his time in Germany. My step-son did not do that well. He was ijured but his physical injuries were nothing compared to what happened to his mind. The boy he had been never showed up again. Your poem is wonderfully well done and I can tell it is heart felt. You should be right up there. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 4/14/2011 3:43:00 PM
Good luck in Miranda's contest, Carolyn! I know she'll enjoy this poem.
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Date: 4/14/2011 3:30:00 PM
Powerful write Carolyn... Jeff
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Date: 4/14/2011 2:54:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this very political work..Sad that our men and now women have to serve in wars..Someday we won't have those wars...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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