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When I'M Eighty-Four

When I was 20, I met  men a plenty
And I made a match with as many
As I could
And all the while my face split
With snotty trails of my travails

When I was 30, I quite dirty
Ran down the aisle in pure white
Trying to fight
Off the smile that threatened 
To overtake my rationality
With love leaking down my cheeks

When I was 40, I a shepherd to shorty
They gathered round for my stories
Wished them more gory
I scolded them into corners
Of the room and my heart
Face contorted with discipline 

When I was 50, being thrifty
Paid off for me and mine
Why I went on vacation
And they to college
And he to another's arms
My face knew not which way to go

When I was 60, I was gifted
With second motherhood
Twice removed of my duties
My face relit with joy and the
chance to spoil them

Now I am 80, I think
And from many memories I still drink
For I would much rather have
My visage cracked from wisdom and laughter
Than be dampened with rivers of regret

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Title is inspired by a Beatles song. I was thinking about it and the last verse came to 
mind after a discussion with a friend about regret.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/12/2014 12:31:00 AM
geez, is this fiction? I had no idea you were old!! No, it can't be! But if you were simply being inspired by that awesome Beatles song or something, I particularly love the last stanza. It really sums up your ideals very nicely.
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 6/12/2014 3:21:00 AM
Of course its true! I'm really 200 years old. Came up with the last stanza first and wrote the rest of it in reverse. I do that a lot with stories as well, probably one of my worse habits.
Date: 6/9/2014 2:05:00 PM
That final verse is so strongly stated Riverbank. I do nor believe in regret, or imperfection, when one is happy with who they are, having faith in their wisdom and the goodness of the Cosmos, regrets just make no damn sense! I would kinda like to write a poem inspired by Norwegian Wood. Xool poetry, I cherish history writes. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/9/2014 10:56:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this write of yours...I must say its very creative. I love the format and your word usage!
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