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Wanderlust

(Collaboration: Paul Callus & Carolyn Devonshire ~ Dec 2020) I sit outside as evening settles in, a teasing breeze plays gently with my hair the mountains bathe in shades of twilight blue a wondrous sight, but none with whom to share. My journey seems to wear on me each day but still I search to sate my hungry heart. Perhaps I should have stayed with my true love, for now I rue my motives to depart. He left one day to chase elusive dreams on restless winds to travel far and wide, a promise made – it lingers in my mind: On his return I was to be his bride. She says she’s waiting patiently and yet I blame myself for leaving her behind because it seems I’ll never find more joy than when our lives together were entwined. I’ve waited long, but hope I shall retain. A thirst for love has made of me a slave. Emotions flow, not easy to explain. Deep down I know his presence I still crave. I found my way back home on Christmas Eve and smiled when candles lit each window frame. Her love still strong; I just had to believe – tomorrow morn’ she’ll take my second name. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ © December 2020

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Date: 3/20/2021 3:39:00 PM
A wonderful poem written by you two. Paul and Carolyn well done on this love story. love phyl
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/21/2021 6:37:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comments, Phyllis, and I am sure Carolyn would love them as well. Hope you're keeping well, my friend. Warm regards // paul
Date: 12/21/2020 5:35:00 PM
Truly a beautiful write. And nice to see a happy ending these days as well. ~ Elegance and Eloquence, Gershon
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Date: 12/24/2020 2:40:00 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it, Gershon...thank you. Regards // paul
Date: 12/21/2020 4:21:00 AM
Wow! Loved it... Kudos to both of you for delivering such a lovely poetry... Congratulations on your well deserved POTD...
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/25/2020 2:35:00 AM
Thank so much, Supraja. Have a lovely and peaceful day. // paul
Date: 12/19/2020 8:12:00 AM
Dear Paul and Carolyn, this is such an enchanting and graceful collaboration. A lovely homecoming for a hungry heart whose wanderlust ultimately brings him back to his true love just in time for Christmas. Luckily, he had a believing and longing heart waiting for him. So inspiring! Sometimes, one needs to take a long, winding road to fulfill their destiny. Congratulations, my two friends, for the very worthy and well-deserved honor of POTD! A heartwarming and beautiful piece! Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 12:43:00 AM
Thank you Susan. Your lovely insightful comments are truly appreciated, so are the congrats. Sending season's greetings to you and your loved ones. ~ Warm regards & Hugs, my friend // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/19/2020 2:43:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. You are so kind. It's always a joy to write with Paul.
Date: 12/16/2020 1:04:00 PM
A wonderful love story...Congratulations Paul Callus and Carolyn Devonshire on POTD...
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/24/2020 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo. Best wishes for Christmas! // paul
Date: 12/16/2020 12:53:00 AM
I'm sure you're sick of the word 'seamless' Paul and Carolyn, but I shall use it anyway, because you are two poets who know how to write like this, seamlessly.Love how your thoughts flow. Congratulations on your POTD honours. Great collaboration as always....Maria Hugs
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 1:12:00 AM
I never tire of hearing positive comments such as yours, Maria:) Thank you for a lovely, pleasant visit which both Carolyn & I truly appreciate. Regards & hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/19/2020 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Maria. Paul and I have had some practice writing together. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Date: 12/15/2020 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you on your POTD win. "Beautiful" Christmas Eve is magical. Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Date: 12/26/2020 1:16:00 AM
Thank you, Paula. Hope Christmas has brought you joy, love and blessings! Warm regards // paul
Date: 12/15/2020 8:03:00 AM
A really wonderful love story told from two vantage points and the reconciliation upon his return on Christmas Eve. Well done on this collaboration, you two, it flows so smoothly and speaks to the universal dichotomy of seeking adventure in the world and love in the home. Congratulations to both of you for receiving POTD for this beauty! ~ John
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2020 2:16:00 AM
Your complimentary and insightful comments are much appreciated, John...thank you! Best regards // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/19/2020 2:45:00 PM
Wow, thank you for your lovely comment, John. Have a merry Christmas!
Date: 12/15/2020 4:29:00 AM
Congratulations (a day late) to both of you for having co-written a potd~
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2020 2:01:00 AM
Never too late to have you visiting, Jenna....the kettle is always on :) Thank you, and have a lovely day! // paul
Date: 12/15/2020 3:56:00 AM
A beautiful collaboration! Congratulations on POTD!
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2020 1:52:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. So pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration. Have a lovely day! // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations to both of you. ~~
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Date: 12/20/2020 1:45:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. May you have a lovely, blessed Sunday. // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 10:55:00 PM
Congratulations to two very special friends. A wonderful collaboration - I was mesmerized from beginning to end - both of you such a talented poet and poetess, inevitable that you would get POTD Hugs, warm regards, and blessings, Jennifer.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2020 2:26:00 AM
Thank you for your generous words, Jenny. You are a source of encouragement and continuous support...much appreciated. Warm regards & Hugs, my friend. // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 7:31:00 PM
This is so beautiful and romantic. True love is Unconditional. You both paint such breathtaking images with your words. My heart is smiling. Congratulations Paul and Carolyn, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2020 1:44:00 AM
Thank you for visiting with lovely words & a smile, Brandy:) Hope you're enjoying the weekend. Hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/19/2020 2:46:00 PM
How sweet, Brandy. Thank you!
Date: 12/14/2020 7:23:00 PM
Back to read this again and to say congratulations on getting Poem of the Day :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2020 2:26:00 AM
Thank you for a double visit, Angela. Have a lovely day:) // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! So deserved. God bless you both
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Date: 12/20/2020 2:28:00 AM
Thank you, Regina...blessings to you too. have a lovely day:) // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations to Paul and Carolynn for this POTD honor given to two immensely talented poets. I truly enjoyed reading this very fine collaborative poem! A very definitive fav.. God bless..
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 1:47:00 AM
Thank you my friend; both complimentary comments and the fav are appreciated. God bless....paul
Date: 12/14/2020 2:58:00 PM
A beautiful telling of a love story from both people, Paul. So tender and emotive. Just had to go "ahh" at the end. Lovely wording! Congratulations on your POTD.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 1:49:00 AM
Thank you, Sam. Hope Christmas & the new year will bring you joy, peace and blessings. // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 2:52:00 PM
A beautiful collaboration Paul , congratulations on POTD! Hugs Eve
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 1:46:00 AM
Thank you, Eve. I hope you are feeling much better now :) Take care. Hugs // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 2:50:00 PM
Ah, you both did an amazing job with this, A union of bliss, strategically place , makes the heart rejoice, Congrats to both of you for a job well done.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 1:51:00 AM
Thank you Vienna:) Glad that our collaboration managed to touch your heart. Warm regards /x/ paul
Date: 12/14/2020 1:47:00 PM
Paul and Carolyn, congratulations on your POTD with this sweet and beautiful story. I adored it :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 2:03:00 AM
Thank you, Akkina :) So pleased you enjoyed:) Wram regards // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 1:29:00 PM
A story many can relate to. Your collaboration speaks of the hearts journey so beautifully. Congratulations to both of you on your POTD honor. Blessings xxoo
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/20/2020 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Connie; lovely to have you stopping by. May the blessings of Christmas be with you now and all the year through. xxoo
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/19/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Connie. I pray you'll have as nice a Christmas as possible. I've been thinking of you.
Date: 12/14/2020 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations Paul on poem of the day with this beautiful collaboration Quatrain poem you and Carolyn have written... Belle
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 2:11:00 AM
Thank you, Belle. Sending you best wishes and blessings. // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 9:23:00 AM
Paul and Carolyn, congratulations on receiving POTD with your wonderful colaboration _Constance
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/14/2020 10:26:00 AM
Thank you, Constance. It's always fun to write with Paul.
Date: 12/14/2020 7:34:00 AM
Stellar composition you two! Congratulations on POTD! xomo x2
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 2:19:00 AM
Many thanks, Maureen!! Hope you have a lovely day....and all the best for the new year! // paul
Date: 12/14/2020 6:59:00 AM
incredibly smooth collaborative effort. An easy unrippled read of lover's longing for and rekindling a flame
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/26/2020 2:27:00 AM
Thank you, John. All the best....paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/14/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thanks, John. We switched it up a bit and Paul wrote the woman's lines while I did the man's.
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