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Vision

At this dawn of "bon voyage", after million escapades of blindfolded fate, I'm trespassing through the pirouetting pigments of fading frolics and windsurfing towards rose-oiled beams of glossy sun as its gossamer grandiose has finally enveloped my soul in sheath of marigold musings and sceneries of sunflower reveries where the dew makes pencilled-promises of green and gold. I have subconsciously swathed my versatile vision with serenity that snorkels between seraphic 'C'est la vie' threads of timeless marine tulips, connecting cosmic dots of the ornamented universe where Pluto's philanthropic sights are sequined as savoir vivre along the dwarfed faith in my heart. I now glide in buoyant embers of scintillating space, passing by blue brothers- Uranus and Neptune, swinging on shiny rings of Saturn and swirling in giant beige-brown storms within Jupiter's merlot belts. Mars greets me with a dusky red wave, as I surf towards venus' pearly white muse and mellifluous ashes of slate grey mercury, whilst immersing my swan-sung hymns within earth's ornate atmosphere painted with beguiling azure, emerald jewels and milky foam. Similar as, sunshine sneaks into the dove-white raindrops, sprinkling phosphenes of internal reflection and dispersing in chiffon hues of vibgyor; Dipped in lavender cinders, I refract seven shades of wildflowers within my sienna spectrum and reflect pastel strips of an ascending snowbird, rising above the beaches embalmed in crimson, flying across skies scattered with roseate rust of the past and arcing along the linen horizon, as smoked carbon coated lenses of my eyes neither hide these burgundy truths wrapped in bittersweet buttercups nor those lichen lies nestle in my sparkling ribs anymore. My skull glows with whipped starlight that no longer twirls in raven dance of gloomy ballads as obsidian silhouettes etched in silver mists don't haunt me with their heinous intentions of unseen reflections anymore, for, thick iced flakes of frozen hours are fading away in the brisk of amiable rays and I'm reborn in helianthus fields. So, if you believe to dwell in dreamcatcher visions of life's trajectories, a twinkling tunnel towards the North star eternally coruscates as an eden of fireflies above the crystal creek and portrays that there's always more hovering beneath the celadon surface of synthetic smiles if you wish to seek beyond the lavish lakes of polished peril.

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Date: 9/16/2023 8:24:00 AM
Entire poem a diamond. This verse especially.""My skull glows with whipped starlight that no longer twirls in raven dance of gloomy ballads as obsidian silhouettes etched in silver mists don't haunt me with their heinous intentions of unseen reflections anymore, for, thick iced flakes of frozen hours are fading away in the brisk of amiable rays and I'm reborn in helianthus fields. "" A gem, a fav. God bless.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/16/2023 8:26:00 AM
You broke the mold with this one my good friend. It has definitive shades of Byron and Shelley too. and Keats as well. God bless you.
Date: 9/15/2023 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/13/2023 5:53:00 PM
Stunning poetry Hiya, you have a wonderful talent and a beautiful artistic vocabulary. Congratulations on your win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
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Date: 9/13/2023 11:45:00 AM
Dear friend Hiya, I am truly delighted to offer my sincere congratulations for your well-earned win in my contest. Your poetry is truly awe-inspiring, as you express your ideas with remarkable accuracy and grace.
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Date: 9/13/2023 3:47:00 AM
"Dipped in lavender cinders, I refract seven shades of wildflowers within my sienna spectrum and reflect pastel strips of an ascending snowbird" Who else can script such beautiful verse. Each time I read your poems I am bowled over by your stunning images and word coinages.... ! "Gossamer grandiose, sheath of marigold musings,dreamcatcher visions of life's trajectories".... all stunning usages! A tour into some magic realms on the buoyancy of imagination! Stellar, dear Hiya
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Date: 9/12/2023 10:27:00 AM
Delightful poem with great imagery and advice,
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Date: 9/12/2023 6:43:00 AM
Oh my angelic star, this is absolutely stunning and so creative, where do i begin praising this brilliant take on vision? I love those alliterations, imagery that flows with such unique and stunning perspectives that would blow any readers mind away. I really love the depth of this and the way you’ve paired words together are so artistic too, like “ pencilled promises” thats so good and “ dreamcatcher visions” “ fireflies above the crystal creek” “ lavish lakes” i am in awe of the way your mind
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/12/2023 6:44:00 AM
Works and weaves words with moving lines that paints a whole story that anyone would dream away to, loved this! Goodluck for the contest. Im sure sotto will love this one
Date: 9/12/2023 5:56:00 AM
A fabulous ride on the wings of your imagination, Hiya. A stunning exploration of cosmos and the universe--a treat for the vision dwelling in dreamscapes. Excellent as always!
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Date: 9/12/2023 3:27:00 AM
Your poem is a delight to read. Great emotions on aspects of the world. Lovely images and great advise. Well done.
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Date: 9/12/2023 3:11:00 AM
Descriptive and expressive language you have used in this advice for a person who wishes to dwell in a perfect world. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/12/2023 2:19:00 AM
As is typical, a original and thought provoking write with such imagery and stunning moments to feed on... this is a delectable, delicious promise feeding on hopes and dreams, prayers that remember only the light, the joy, the peace. this is a whisper of grace to encourage the faith. God bless you my friend. With love, Gina
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