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View From the Bridge

VIEW FROM THE BRIDGE From the bridge, track the ghosts of line, goods yard, Old Town Station Where we lingered and noted the numbers of each passing train Web of steel and of steam entwined village and town across nation 'Til Arcadian rural slow lines suffered untimely wane Gone: the Market where cows sheep and pigs brought in telling perceptions The images, noises and smells of the farms to the town The tweeded farmers with leathery limbs and faces And gaiters of deepest sheen in a rich chestnut brown Flaxen ropes, billhooks, pitchforks enough for a peasants' uprising Spread along the High street and over the Corn Exchange square While Newport Street furnished inns for all thirsts' reviving And above all, the clock tower made skyline iconic and fair Then was school run not cosseted chauffeured, in family car But raced, skipped or dawdled through field, street, market and station Our little world teamed with action, unscreened, with no bar Of health and safety; adventure without filtration In that world we seemed in different incarnation So are we the same people, and do we now view the same place? Can we yet discern immortality's intimation? The adventure goes on though perhaps at a difference pace.

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Date: 1/13/2018 6:34:00 AM
Great poem about the loss that is the flipside of "progress". (BTW: Do you mean "wane" instead of "wain"?)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/13/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks John and well spotted. Yes I did mean wane. I will amend it.
Date: 1/12/2018 11:37:00 AM
What a journey you have taken me on, Geoffrey. Thank you for sharing and many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/12/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thank you for your feedback, and kind words Elaine.
Date: 1/10/2018 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Geoffrey.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/10/2018 1:29:00 PM
Many thanks, Line.
Date: 1/10/2018 5:41:00 AM
These are things I think on all the time, Geoffrey, and I so relate ... wonderfully penned, my friend - congrats on your win! :-)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/10/2018 1:40:00 PM
Glad to receive a response from one who shares the nostalgia for places and experiences that we may never see again. Thanks for your kind words, Gregory.

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