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Torn Curtains Blowing

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My dream is taking me back- back to my old home, the room that was mine is now faded in time; torn curtains are blowing in the wind while I roam. In the open window- I hesitate then climb, I stand silent in the stillness with reflection; the room that was mine is now faded in time. Such sweet memories I hold to my heart with affection, I can hear the laughter of grandma and mother; I stand silent in the stillness with reflection. Once that floor was shiny where I played with brother, all my dollies used to wait on my bed for me; I can hear the laughter of grandma and mother. Beyond those tattered curtains- flowers I would see, I think those days in this home were my very best; all my dollies used to wait on my bed for me. I feel sleepy- so lay down in my old nest, my dream is taking me back, back to my old home; I think my days in this home were my very best, torn curtains are blowing in the wind while I roam. ______________________ Written, August 25, 2017 Poetry/Terzanelle/Torn Curtains Blowing Copyright Protected, ID 17-9336-13-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Terzanelle Time sponsor, Joseph May, December 9, 2017 Second Place ______________________ Written for the contest, Blowing In The Wind sponsor, Nicola Byrne, September, 19, 2017 First Place

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Date: 12/10/2017 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Such a nostalgic write.
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Date: 12/10/2017 5:36:00 AM
I liked this nostalgic journey Broken Wings...Beautiful write..Thank you and congrats on your win
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Date: 12/9/2017 7:14:00 PM
Awesome write, Broken Wings, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/8/2017 3:40:00 PM
Constance, such a beautiful, well written poem reflecting back on childhood. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. John
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Date: 11/7/2017 7:23:00 AM
Lovely terzanelle, Constance, that evokes beautiful long lasting memories:)
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:54:00 AM
Lovely poem BW--soothing sentiments and beautiful expressions--best for a win!
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:53:00 AM
This is so very beautiful my friend! I just love a good touching memory, thoughts of the past that evoke emotions such as these...such an awesome portrayal of a loving home where the tattered curtains blow in the wind! What a gorgeous piece, Great Work!!
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