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    May- 13- 2025 Pick a Title- Vol. 51. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

 

Confined within rusty iron bars, grounded eternally to hop and trip, wishing to fly into Heaven’s starry bower, a bird b e a t s her wings in vain, voicing her anguish in tremulous trills. There is hunger at every tip of her feather to fly and flutter through the pathless air, piping melodious tunes to drown the earth, seeing lands never eyed by anyone before. Nursing her dreams, she beats her wings again, to reach a place where the soul sings. Alas! The clamour of her beating resounds, and she falls asleep exhausted! In her sleep, her desires limp back. She dreams of shooting into higher altitudes, and becoming a speck among fleecy clouds. But she knows the sky that stretches limitless is a premise far beyond her reach. As she sees birds in flock flying away, to seamless ends sculpting sweet images, in her vision, she sees herself soaring high and she beats her wings again and again, to feel tired and feeling tired to fall asleep, and in her snooze, to d r e a m again!

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Date: 5/14/2025 6:47:00 AM
Dear Valsa, this is a breathtakingly beautiful piece—its rhythm mirrors the beating of wings, a dance between hope and despair. The imagery of the bird's yearning for boundless skies, despite her confinement, captures the essence of longing with such raw elegance. The cycle of dreaming and trying again speaks to an unyielding spirit, a testament to resilience even in the face of impossible odds. Absolutely stunning!
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Date: 5/13/2025 3:38:00 PM
I like where you took this. To a deeper level by using the metaphor of a caged bird. Great work, Valsa
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Date: 5/13/2025 8:41:00 AM
A very deeply moving and heartfelt poem this is dear valsa, youv written a poem that would make readers feel the anguish and longing to fly away! To attain eternal nirvana and freedom! How profound and evocative too! I especially love your arrangement of words and how they flow in such an easy and eloquent manner, your words always are flawless! I especially love the lines “ But she knows the sky that stretches limitless is a premise far beyond her reach.” i felt those words so strongly! Someday she will learn to fly! Until then. this goes into my faves ! Pleasure reading! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 5/13/2025 7:04:00 AM
lovely expression of one's desire for freedom and the right to explore all possibilities leading to self actualization...a gem, valsa!
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Date: 5/13/2025 4:53:00 AM
What a metaphor! You are a bird longing to soar high and sing loud! A bird dreaming to fly high "seeing lands never eyed before "! My dear Valsa, You are a poetess who cannot accept to be confined to the limitations of a grounded world.. wishing to always fly on the wings of her words and wonderful poetry to realms of beauty, wonder and inspiration.. carving her very gems, composing her very songs, writing her very legacy.. Despite all that would hamper you my dear poetess, always thriving rising again and again to write amazing poetry! So much enjoyed reading you! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
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