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Background -Commander Spock first officer, Captain James.T. Kirk, lieutenant Uhura,

and Commander Scott Chief Engineer.

Foreground - Ensign Chekov, Ensign Cunningham and Helmsman Mr Sulu.

 

 

 

My training at Starfleet was over, they were now deploying me I was over the moon when they called; I was full of glee I entered the transporter room where I'd dematerialize And within seconds I was aboard, the Starship Enterprise. I was an expert on Klingonese; they needed me for interpretation Their council leaders on Kronos wanted to join the federation I unpacked all my bags and then put my things in storage Then a message came through asking me to report to the bridge. I caught the fast turbo lift that would take me up there And the first person that I saw was Captain Kirk in his chair He stood up to welcome me and to introduce me to the crew Mr Spock from Vulcan, Ensign Checkov and Mr Sulu. He then told me to sit down by the helmsman Mr Sulu Who would show me the ropes and tell me what to do I learnt very fast but there was an awful lot to take in When I went off duty and lay down, I felt my head spin. The next day I was introduced to the rest of the crew Doctor 'Bones' McCoy, Mr Scott and Lieutenant Uhuru I felt a bit out of place but they all put me at ease And I was soon up and running and it became a breeze. We were travelling at warp speed for the most part of our journey And soon we'd make contact and they were relying on me All my leisure time was spent studying, Klingon language books I practised aggressive facial expressions, that brought me strange looks. I went to the galley to advise them on what food to prepare Along with blood wine and bregut lung meat that was raw and rare Then I got a call from the bridge to come up right away And when I got there, on the monitor were three Klingon birds of prey. The Captain opened hailing frequencies then I stood up to speak A senior klingon from the high council introduced himself as Jal' Zeek In an aggressive manner I gave him, a welcoming greeting And invited him on board ship for our very first meeting. He was beamed aboard with advisors and to help lighten the mood Was escorted to the galley, for blood wine and some food For Spock and the captain I translated, everything that they had to say And relayed the Klingons responses, things were certainly going our way. After an exhausting five days, the meetings came to an end The klingons no longer the aggressor, more like a trusted friend The Federation and the Klingon empire had agreed a peace treaty Captain Kirk was full of praise and said it was all down to me. We were invited down to the surface for a trade deal to discuss It went well trade was agreed that would benefit them and us We beamed up and left Klingon orbit and were soon on our way And I was looking forward to some shore leave back home in Monterey. Written stardate 5-2-20-21.

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Date: 3/18/2022 10:27:00 PM
My.... ! This sounds so real ! You look majestic... (the bald man in black outfit! ) The entire story appears so plausible ! You are indeed amazing Tom !
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Date: 3/19/2022 4:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Grew up watching star trek, seen every episode. Tom
Date: 2/27/2021 5:04:00 AM
Wow Tom...and I am sure the Klingons made you their Poet Laureate and Chief of Photoshopping ha ha Really enjoyed this adventure with you. Best, SuZ
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Date: 2/27/2021 10:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Suz, as you've probably guessed im a trekkie, and to be on the bridge with Spock and Kirk was the icing on the cake, Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 2/23/2021 3:21:00 PM
I got a real kick out of this Tom. Great photo editing and writing! I'm sure I've seen all the episodes (more than once - don't tell, shhh) - the technology on the show was so far advanced for its time and many do not realize it. Perfect and I see I'm late with a congrats! Linda
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Date: 2/23/2021 3:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Linda, it was a brilliant show for sure, and many things have been developed from it like mobile phones and theyre experimenting with transporting objects but still early days in its development. Tom
Date: 2/22/2021 3:11:00 PM
haha, not really knowing you except by one picture here at Soup as an Avatar, I would probably never have gotten that without you telling me, How cool you got a POtd WITH IT.
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Date: 2/22/2021 3:36:00 PM
Lol well spotted Andrea, a bit of photo trickery. Tom
Date: 2/20/2021 6:22:00 AM
Tom, Just brilliant! how well you have written this! Congrats on POTD! well deserved! your story is superb and for a few minutes we were all aboard the enterprise!! Brought back memories from 1980s!!
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Date: 3/13/2021 1:43:00 PM
I missed that Tom! Yes, I see you can fly that craft!!
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Date: 2/20/2021 11:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Krish, must have seen every episode and different series, Did you notice the crew, the man in a black top lol Tom
Date: 2/19/2021 5:11:00 PM
Nice editing, looks natural. In another life maybe... I wanted to come back on the Enterprise and discuss things with Spock. I even learned to raise my eyebrow.
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Date: 2/20/2021 5:44:00 AM
who doesn't part their fingers before giving the greeting, live long and prosper. Lol
Date: 2/18/2021 3:34:00 PM
Sorry Tom, I forgot to include that. I think you look right at home on the bridge of the Enterprise with Capt.James Tiberius Kirk and fellow officers. Love it, Tom! : )
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Date: 2/18/2021 3:39:00 PM
Thank you again Sandra, bit of photo editing got me a seat on the bridge.
Date: 2/18/2021 11:42:00 AM
I enjoyed the story...Congratulations Tom Cunningham on POTD...It was my favorite show, by the way...
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Date: 2/18/2021 11:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Arturo, mine too, watched them all. Hope you're well, live long and prosper. Tom
Date: 2/17/2021 8:58:00 AM
Sorry Tom... Congrats on POTD!! PS Thank you for your kind welcome back.
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Date: 2/17/2021 11:35:00 AM
No worries Sandra, lovely to see you back. Tom
Date: 2/17/2021 8:57:00 AM
A step back in time, bringing all of the memories of wonderful times that I spent on the Starship Enterprise. Well written Tom, you brought them all back to me. Becoming fluent in Klingonese, not an easy thing to do. Kudos!
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Date: 2/17/2021 11:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandra, always looked forward to episodes of star trek when I was growing up, even now I never get tired of it. Hope youre keeping ok. Did you like the picture. Tom
Date: 2/17/2021 6:12:00 AM
Ha ha, I missed that Tom. You fit right in buddy. :0)
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Date: 2/17/2021 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Richard, with a background changer I beamed aboard lol. Tom
Date: 2/15/2021 1:23:00 PM
Well penned. Well remembered from a time when attributes of goodies were well defined. Now hard to distinguish goodies from baddies. Shows like Star Trek, Dr Who, Gun smoke etc are all examples. Dr Who because it is current yet keeps the same message of hope and triumph of good over evil alive along with courage in adversity. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 2/15/2021 1:28:00 PM
Thank you very much David, those old classics were as you say, good triumphing over the evil baddies and the heroes won the day, today's offerings are the opposite with the message that crime is okay if you can get away with it.. Tom
Date: 2/15/2021 8:33:00 AM
Fine write Tom, congrats on the POTD! Afraid I was never a star trek fan but good for you to love it. Hope all is good with you, I had my vaccine last week with no effects, Take care, Gordon
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Date: 2/15/2021 8:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Gordon, all good here and glad youve had your vaccine and no side effects, hopefully this will get us back to normality. Tom
Date: 2/14/2021 9:45:00 AM
I see it was also POTD! Congrats. ;0)
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Date: 2/14/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you again Richard. Tom
Date: 2/14/2021 9:44:00 AM
This is fun, I was hooked on Star Trek from the very first time it aired. Well done Tom.
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Date: 2/14/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you very much Richard, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Did you see the crew? Tom
Date: 2/14/2021 3:37:00 AM
Lovely story... lovely rhyme... lovely ride on the Starship Enterprise. Enjoyed. God bless you with love and prayers and congrats on POTD, too... love, Gina
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Date: 2/14/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Regina, im happy you enjoyed it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Date: 2/12/2021 3:46:00 PM
Great story, Tom, belated congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/13/2021 1:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve, hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 2/11/2021 1:12:00 PM
Wow! What a great POTD, Tom! Only you could find a way to give Star Fleet and the Klingons a better relationship. How is your Klingonese coming along? LOL Enjoyed immensely!! Hugs, Carolyn (fave)
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Date: 2/11/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Carolyn, and for the fave, im quite fluent lol. Rrfy bjiigg xgghe (hope you're well). Tom
Date: 2/11/2021 2:42:00 AM
I see this is about Star Wars, Tom, you tell stories well and that too in rhyme:) belated congratulations on your POTD:)
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Date: 2/11/2021 4:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Jo, glad you enjoyed it, have seen every episode of star trek, from the original series to the present, I never get tired of watching it. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 2/10/2021 5:59:00 AM
WOW Tom, What a terrific story and involving yourself in the team was absolutely brilliant. Congratulations on a wonderful POTD, quite an adventure. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/10/2021 6:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, as you've probably guessed I'm a big fan. Tom
Date: 2/9/2021 1:20:00 PM
Interesting work. I remember the Star Wars series from years ago. Seems like they have a new one on TV now. I watched it some years ago. Wasn't my favorite but a lot of people especially the younger ones liked it. I enjoyed reading about your trip and the excitement in being on the space ship. Sara
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, the original series set the standard for sci fi, gone are the days of strings you'd often see with plastic models. Tom
Date: 2/8/2021 10:30:00 PM
They didn't give you a uniform, My friend. But you more than make up for that discretion, with this delightful poem. Being a fan of the original, really takes me along with every word..This is so good.
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Date: 2/9/2021 1:15:00 AM
It hadnt arrived before we set off and the captain had to keep to a tight schedule lol. Glad you enjoyed it Harry. Live long and prosper. Tom
Date: 2/8/2021 9:48:00 PM
Hooray for your POTD, Tom. Funny to me because you are always the first person to congratulate all the rest of us if it happens. I have no idea how you always know first, but I imagine you were the first one to know. This is adorable! I am sharing it with the biggest Trekkie I know - my husband.
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Date: 2/9/2021 1:13:00 AM
It did come up and I was in two minds whether or not to congratulate myself for a joke but decided not as folk might think im a narcissist lol. Hope your husband enjoys it. Tom
Date: 2/8/2021 4:58:00 PM
I guess I missed this well-scripted POTD, Tom, because I took one look at the Trekkers and, well -- My best friend in high school was a huge Trekkie, and it was always cutting into whatever activity we were engaged in at the time. So, I'm not a Trekkie. But glad to see you get POTD! Hurrah! :) gw
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Date: 2/9/2021 1:11:00 AM
Thank you very much for your return visit Gershon, I suppose it was that kind of show where you either loved or hated it. Me, I was a lover. Tom
Date: 2/8/2021 1:32:00 PM
aha, so your home was Monterey!! Are you a fictional character you invented, or one of those pictured above here? I watched Star TRek a bit in my youth but never got into it enough to know many details. Great job. Connie mentions a POTD?? Or was that just her wish for you? You surely did the Enterprise team proud!
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Date: 2/8/2021 1:46:00 PM
Ive been to Monterey years ago and it fitted nicely lol. Look at the pic closely, who do you recognise? Its yours truly sitting down. Yes it was a fictional write. It was potd on Saturday. Tom
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