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The Wedding Gown

The wedding Gown She stepped boldly, stoically erect to the strains of the wedding march, radiant in the resplendent beauty of her gown and poetic demeanor. The long silken train, the work of tens of thousands of weavers harvesting in the trees of Changsha to highlight the sanctity of the moment and the purity of body as she spoke, “I do”. The daughter She lay sleeping gently doing the little sucking moves which every new babe makes with her tiny lips. Her once wrinkled face now smooth with traces of resemblance to her mother. Unafraid on his arm her eyes reflecting from the white silken train made from a wedding gown already hallowed by promises kept. She looked up and smiled as the water placed on her head promised things of which she knew nothing. The marriage She stood in the vestibule waiting for the crescendo to signal her entrance. Trembling slightly from anticipation she fidgeted with the train of her long white gown. That same white gown from Hunan province, a tad shorter now to accommodate so long ago, her christening. She touched it lovingly, knowing that tomorrow, she would carry another to feel its texture, smooth as baby’s breath. The grand daughter She was above the pulpit of the church. From some place of which she did not know, she peered down upon a small casket not open. Within which she knew her earthly flesh lay draped in silk from Changsha. She somehow sensed the family bond and the import of having a constant to lean on. Lying upon the same soft weave her mother felt, the generations entwined helplessly impressed into its folds, a grandmother, a mother, and yet another babe into this life line. Surely the expectations of man, do often go astray, and nothing lasts but the silk from Changsha. ~//~ For Catie's Free Verse Frenzy contest

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Date: 3/22/2011 12:48:00 PM
Simply put, this is beyond magnificent, Charles. Life is the most sacred gift from God and as we live in his light we can see his purpose from one generation to the next. So well deserving of it's presence at the top of the Winners' List! Congratulations! I pray you and your family are doing very well! Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/22/2011 9:19:00 AM
(2)You've done this!! "I HAVE BEEN HONORED “personally” INDEED OF GOD MY FATHER IN HAVING THE PRIVILEGE OF KNOWING YOU AND IN BEING SELECTED BY YOUR WISDOM OF UNCONDITIONAL LOVE!! AND THIS WAS BY BEING HONORED IN YOUR CONTESTS IN FIRST PLACE HONORS. BLESSINGs OF PARANORMAL LOVE BE POURED OUT UNTO YOU and yours. My friend Charles, one cannot achieve any higher honor, than to seek and choose their own source(God) above the flesh foible. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/22/2011 9:12:00 AM
(1)Excellent job Charles in honoring life itself. "Reveals the great piece of art that you are yourself"Charles in your Free Verse.Forwhen one discovers thethings that are important in life, hidden within life'sown perfection!They have discoverthe beautyof Godessence. Having done so,thenone is apt to look past the foible flesh body to see the essence of Love's beauty hidden within the perfection of the Sacred heart ofanother! You've done this in your poem and in honoring God essence in others
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Date: 3/21/2011 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations to you Charles for your win in Catie's contest "Free Verse Frenzy". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/21/2011 6:49:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Charles. Many congratulations on your BIG WIN. Elaine
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Date: 3/21/2011 12:39:00 AM
cheer for your grand win in catie's tourney, cherles.. stunning! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/20/2011 3:30:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your wonderful success in Catie's contest.. enjoy a special victory with luv ... excellent write..
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Date: 3/20/2011 2:21:00 PM
If Catie wasn't adverse to more than one #1 all three of the first three are #1 Charles this was magnificent! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/20/2011 11:33:00 AM
Excellent, Charles. The transition and the poignacy drifts so neatly from one stanza to the next. The values and morals you presented here are both realistic and haunting. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 3/20/2011 9:59:00 AM
So happy to see your poem ranking high in the contest, Charles. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/20/2011 8:04:00 AM
Well done Charles, good to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy honor in third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/13/2011 1:14:00 PM
Interesting work..Good luck in the contest with this one that reads like a winner..Sara
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Date: 3/13/2011 6:32:00 AM
Generations come and go, Charles, and you wove the story so well in your free verse. I did not know silk came from Changsha, but I like the way you describe it as outlasting the lives of people. A very meaningful poem. Soup mail. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/12/2011 10:20:00 PM
Charles, this one is mature and very deep. A few parts a bit hard for me (I know MY most recent free verse was difficult for people because very few seemed to know what I was talking about in the beginning!) For example, what means "men gang aft agley?" I LOVE that last line you used to tie everything up. nothing lasts but the silk from Changsha. You think like me sometimes about life!
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