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The Stir of Dry Bones

These lines were written for a contest about aging on another poetry site. They do not reflect my attitude about the process, nor should you allow them to affect you. My sorrowful thoughts were wandering in yesterday, the stubborn ones that always ignore my plea to leave. There was a time when scampering was normal for me, but reaching maturity to a ripe old age offers no dignity. It rages against infirmities and cruelly chooses to scold and defies nature's honored words, 'the rebirth of spring.' I prefer to believe... "a body untouched at any age decays if no hands know its splendor; that life and time are wasted."* The elderly do not regenerate like new leaves on a tree or as tulips sprout their new buds through March snow. No, but sing no canticle of lyrics in a requiem for me. Although I feel the sting of a wild tempestuous wind that brushes my body but does dare not touch my soul. Like time, it slaps my face, knowing it's in total control, as the crashing waves that batter the sandy beach coast and ancient granite cliffs that have not committed a sin. There is nary a damn thing humans can do to recapture the dancing days of youth by challenging the hourglass. It makes us frail and brittle, unwilling slaves to our years. Little by little, with each burdensome step all of us take, there's a pensive physical and emotional stir of dry bones. The kind of pain no one could condone, but time and life progress despite our tears, and distressing mortal fears. A spoonful of something won't help the truth taste better. * Quote in part by Roman Payne For an attitude adjustment you might like to read: “Aging gracefully means being flexible, being open, allowing change, enjoying life’s journey, and continuing to love.” – Unknown “But if we are truly happy inside, then age brings with it a maturity, a depth, and a power that only magnifies our radiance.” - David Deida, “The older I get the less I care what other people think of me. Therefore, the older I get the more I enjoy life.” - Oscar Auliq-Ice “I've enjoyed every age I've been, and each has had its own individual merit. Every laugh line, every scar, is a badge I wear to show I've been present, the inner rings of my personal tree trunk that I display proudly for all to see. Nowadays, I don't want a "perfect" face and body; I want to wear the life I've lived.” - Pat Benatar

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Date: 3/17/2024 9:54:00 PM
I wouldn't be too intimidated by age nor fear its bite when you can write poems like this, the years halt before the pen.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/18/2024 5:40:00 AM
Another year of living and I'm not intimidated by aging. I'm grateful for each day of waking to hear songbirds and watch the dawning of sunlight. Thanks for the compliments, Paul. Being of right mind (I guess that depends on who you'd ask) I continue to love writing. Your last six words express my thoughts... exactly.
Date: 3/17/2024 9:49:00 AM
What a powerful write. Great ending/so true. "A spoonful of something won't help the truth taste better." (Even Candy) I feel age is just a number. True, one cannot do the same at an old age as when young but so what. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/17/2024 9:52:00 AM
I totally agree with you, Paula. So what? We learn to do new things that perhaps we will find more exciting and/or things we appreciate with a new outlook. Thanks for the thoughts and have a great Sunday!
Date: 3/16/2024 6:08:00 PM
Dear Lin, A wonderful meditation on the realities of aging and the inevitable passage of time. Your words are filled with raw emotion and introspection, capturing the complex mix of sorrow, resilience, and acceptance that comes with growing older. Through your reflections, you invite us to confront the harsh truths of mortality while finding strength in the enduring spirit within. Lin, I love how your honesty and vulnerability are both courageous and deeply moving. - Blessings, Daniel
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/17/2024 6:01:00 AM
It's a reality that we all face, Daniel and thank you for such a detailed review of my verses. Having a positive attitude about maturing is not always easy when we look in the mirror. Lol. C'est la vie is better than c'est la mort!
Date: 3/16/2024 5:16:00 PM
I hope it does well in the contest, if a present day one. And imagine it did well if a past contest. I thought your words were thought-provoking and an open dialog to aging. I like the different viewpoints expressed in the quote at the bottom of the page. Thanks for sharing! Have a pleasant evening. Bill
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/17/2024 5:57:00 AM
I will definitely let you know if it medaled in the contest on AP, Bill. There were so many other quotes that were justified about the pros of growing a titch older! Thank you so much!
Date: 3/16/2024 4:58:00 PM
Sincere and profound words...thanks for sharing them...many people our age do struggle with adjusting to what some call 'the new normal.' Your poem underscores that difficulty. I especially liked these lines: There is nary a damn thing humans can do to recapture the dancing days of youth by challenging the hourglass. It makes us frail and brittle, unwilling slaves to our years.Acceptance of aging is what I do. That helps me. Nicely done! have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/17/2024 5:55:00 AM
I love it when a poet's comments included lines they prefer, as you often do. Accept it and embrace it as do/did the people whose quotes I've listed. Thank you very much for your keen remarks, Sara.
Date: 3/16/2024 4:33:00 PM
A thought provoking piece Lin, I guess we just have to accept the aging process as there is precious little we can do to stop it but my dancing days are far from over and I will keep going - got to say I love the quote by Pat Benetar! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2024 5:53:00 AM
No other choice, Jan so we keep motivating day by day. Don't you ever stop dancing or writing! Thanks!

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