the raw madness that makes me who I am

It amuses me when people ask
“How are you?”
Fortunately for us both
They never ask
“Who are you?”

For that answer relies upon a deep dive
Into the hollows of a heart
The scorched remains of a soul
A lonely walk
Through the darkness of youth
The crumbled “joy” of innocence
The malingering residue of defeat.

Do not ask who I am
Just leave me to further become
The residue of resurrection’s raw madness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. You made us think. That is a good thing...  Have a blessed day with your win..............
Davey Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 12:34 PM
This write is definitely my fav of this contest. Put so very well my friend and congrats on your win
Wolf Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 8:18 PM
Cheshire Cat will ask you --- on your next trip down the Rabbit Hole! ~ WHO ARRRRRRRE YOU?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 5:07 PM
Yes. I’m not sure what else to say.
Trestrail Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 3:57 PM
Brilliant. It’s writes like these that make me stay on this site. You are no slouch with the quill, sir.
Lawless Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 8:18 PM
I consider that a compliment not a comment.....we (I) need you here on the soup
Romios Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Very well written, John! “Becoming” does trump who we once were. Although, our pasts are an integral part of who we are today.. And yet.. liike toilet paper, the past sticks to the bottom of our shoes. (I mean that only in a metaphorical sense!) On a site like this, its easy to find the chameleons.changing colors often, with impressive verbiage,these are the ones I really never trust.. it takes awhile for me to trust A Fish called Pangie xx
Romios Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 12:47 AM
John, I appreciate your humor and friendship ! It does get londely here amindst the corals of the poetic sea. But I now know wes swim in the same oceanss of respect. A fish czlled Pangie. Pangie
Lawless Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 8:16 PM
love that metaphor Pangie. and you get the earned the gold star for the proper use of the word trump in a sentence. I appreciate our poetic friendship Pangie.
Lane Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 9:09 AM
As insanely humorous I find your punning and tongue in cheek, your serious writes are doubly profound. Last 3 lines should be written into a screenplay. Exceptionally worthy of a soliloquy moment.
Lane Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 8:45 PM
Insanely!!!
Lawless Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 8:12 PM
WOW, with comments like this I may start to believe I am a poet....but wait....would that be madness
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