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the raw madness that makes me who I am

It amuses me when people ask “How are you?” Fortunately for us both They never ask “Who are you?” For that answer relies upon a deep dive Into the hollows of a heart The scorched remains of a soul A lonely walk Through the darkness of youth The crumbled “joy” of innocence The malingering residue of defeat. Do not ask who I am Just leave me to further become The residue of resurrection’s raw madness

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Date: 11/21/2024 1:22:00 PM
well executed - great finish
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Date: 11/19/2024 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. You made us think. That is a good thing...  Have a blessed day with your win..............
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Date: 11/16/2024 12:34:00 PM
This write is definitely my fav of this contest. Put so very well my friend and congrats on your win
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Date: 10/1/2024 8:18:00 PM
Cheshire Cat will ask you --- on your next trip down the Rabbit Hole! ~ WHO ARRRRRRRE YOU?
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Date: 9/29/2024 5:07:00 PM
Yes. I’m not sure what else to say.
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Date: 9/28/2024 3:57:00 PM
Brilliant. It’s writes like these that make me stay on this site. You are no slouch with the quill, sir.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2024 8:18:00 PM
I consider that a compliment not a comment.....we (I) need you here on the soup
Date: 9/28/2024 1:14:00 PM
Very well written, John! “Becoming” does trump who we once were. Although, our pasts are an integral part of who we are today.. And yet.. liike toilet paper, the past sticks to the bottom of our shoes. (I mean that only in a metaphorical sense!) On a site like this, its easy to find the chameleons.changing colors often, with impressive verbiage,these are the ones I really never trust.. it takes awhile for me to trust A Fish called Pangie xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/29/2024 12:47:00 AM
John, I appreciate your humor and friendship ! It does get londely here amindst the corals of the poetic sea. But I now know wes swim in the same oceanss of respect. A fish czlled Pangie. Pangie
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John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2024 8:16:00 PM
love that metaphor Pangie. and you get the earned the gold star for the proper use of the word trump in a sentence. I appreciate our poetic friendship Pangie.
Date: 9/28/2024 9:09:00 AM
As insanely humorous I find your punning and tongue in cheek, your serious writes are doubly profound. Last 3 lines should be written into a screenplay. Exceptionally worthy of a soliloquy moment.
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/28/2024 8:45:00 PM
Insanely!!!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/28/2024 8:12:00 PM
WOW, with comments like this I may start to believe I am a poet....but wait....would that be madness

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