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The Paradiddle of Being —
Book Three: Just Be

Daniel Henry Rodgers

"We are sheet music written in staves of flesh and steel the rest is improvisation. Civilization's clave patterns three steps forward, two heartbeats lost. The paradiddle of consciousness a right-hand reason, left-hand dream. We are flams waiting to happen just one layer of skin, one layer of soul. Each protest chant contains the herta of extinction
with a quick, quick, slow, gone."

- Poet

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IX. In the ICU, machines create their own songo— ventilator, heart monitor, IV pump— forming an accidental orchestra the clutch of machinery holding time like a hi-hat choking its own decay. Underneath the electronic rhythms the human body maintains its own stubborn organic tempo— proving that even at the edge of existence we are fundamentally musical beings. The climate protestor's chant becomes a militant clave pattern— Save our planet! Save our planet!— 3-2, then 2-3, the rhythm shifting as urgency demands variation— the drumbeat of activism learning to match the accelerating tempo of ecological collapse. X. And you—yes, you reading this— your eyes move across these lines in their own syncopated pattern saccading left to right in measures of meaning-making. Your brain creating brushed hi-hat patterns from the friction of thought against the snare drum of language. Your heart, that most faithful percussion section has been playing the same basic rock beat since before you drew first breath— occasionally throwing in jazz fills during moments of terror or ecstasy herta bursts—three quick, one slow— when joy demands irregular verbs. Sometimes slowing to ballad tempo when love finally finds the groove you didn't know you'd been keeping. What moves without memory is noise— but rhythm with ache is defiance. XI. This is what the drums have always known: existence is collaborative improvisation— we are each other’s rhythm section the paradiddle of human connection: reach out, pull back, reach out, reach out— pataflafla of overlapping voices where no one plays alone. The fundamental pattern underlying all philosophy, all theology all attempts to make sense of this beautiful, broken symphony. The single-stroke roll of days becomes the buzz roll of years becomes the eternal silence that gives meaning to all sound. But in between—in the sacred space between one beat and the next— we have this: the chance to play our part in the grand composition to add our own ghost notes to the ongoing improvisation of being human. XII. So when you wake tomorrow to the shuffle rhythm of morning routine— remember: You are both drummer and drum, both striker and struck— creating ripples in the fabric of reality with every decision, every breath every moment you choose to accent: love over fear connection over isolation rhythm over silence. The world is waiting for your solo. The count is: one, two, three, four— …. Play Ratamacue—Ratamacue— Paradiddle-diddle, Flamadiddle— ghost notes flickering between heartbeats syncopation staccatoed through lungs your hands conjuring patterns no metronome could predict. Crash cymbal of intention— splash cymbal of hope— cross stick of hesitation clutch of breath before the downbeat. Every rudiment you call out is a memory made audible— a story in the language of rhythm. Flamacue, pataflafla, herta— let impossible syllables tumble from your palms like prayers, like declarations like the secret names for joy and to be and becoming. The song is unfinished. The sticks are in your hands. You are the drum that cannot be stifled. So play— and let the world answer in ratamacues of thunder in paradiddles of rain in the space between beats where everything waits to be heard. Play on.

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Mike Bayles

Date: 6/15/2025 8:30:00 AM

Play on, Daniel. I like the drum part as a metaphor of life. I can see from your poem that rhythm is a big part of life.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/11/2025 6:00:00 PM

eyes "saccading left to right in measures of meaning-making." - "when love finally finds the groove you didn't know you'd been keeping." this is going to my favs, Daniel. Intense, and with strength.

Paul Willason

Date: 6/11/2025 4:51:00 AM

Hi Daniel, You take poetry into quite original territory, though in a way you are rediscovering and educating the reader on the ancient roots of the art...the rythms of language and existence in general. I was challenged at first...I ingested through the eyes...your poetry must be recited aloud. Brilliantly done...a treat for the mind by crafting words into meaning and a gift to the ear. Your poetry is to be studied and not subjected to just a casual read. Gives ample dividend for the effort.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 6/11/2025 11:17:00 AM

Hello Paul, your words mean more than you know. You saw what I was reaching for and not just verse, but voice, rhythm, soul. Thank you for reciting it aloud, for listening with your whole being. I write for readers like you, who don’t skim, but enter. Grateful for your insight, your generosity, your poetic spirit. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Anne Winter

Date: 6/10/2025 5:14:00 AM

Dearest Daniel, how brilliant your mind is to write such a masterpiece! "Play on" I'm going to remember this poem forever, if there is a forever or until I exist. This poem is truly impactful. It is truly brilliant that poetry can make you see something very beautifully creative even in a serious place like ICU. The way you've written this poem shows dedication and creativity. Very inspiring, my dearest friend! With love and respect always, Anne

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2025 10:46:00 AM

Dearest Anne, Your words wrapped around me like a warm shawl and a cup of tea, so comforting, affirming, and deeply felt. To know that my poem might linger with you “if there is a forever” is a gift beyond poetry. You always see the heart behind my lines, even in the sterility of an ICU. Thank you for your love, your respect, and your friendship. I treasure you, truly my poet friend. Blessings, My Dear Anne, Daniel

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/9/2025 4:05:00 PM

Blood pressure is much like rhythmic drums, when taken in between beats- Thumpity--thump thump, or a heart murmur. lol "We are sheet music written in staves of flesh" i love how you've woven poetry with rhythmic sounds, so profound. I loved everything about this and it feels freeing. I can hear the snare drum pssaw! Poet, you are creative, innovative and edgy! "You are the drum that cannot be stifled. So play" how generous of you to give us courage to express. Ty for sharing, shall you be adding audio? It really is a nice voice, lucky~ Happy Retirement Daniel! ;D

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/10/2025 8:19:00 PM

What a nice recital, "reach out! " Great energy, ha I like the paradiddles funny word. Amasing,. Bravisimo! That was nice, Daniel, and fun~ ty

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2025 5:09:00 PM

Dear Anaya, I recorded it just because you asked and so here is to you My Dear Friend! Blessings, Daniel

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2025 10:44:00 AM

Dear Anaya, Today, your words filled me with such warmth and joy and I thank you. You heard the breath beneath the poem, felt its rhythm in your bones, and spoke to it like only a true poet-friend could. I’m moved by your kindness, your energy, your pssaw! You gave my lines back to me with even more life. I'm truly grateful, and smiling wide. Blessings, My Dear Anaya, Daniel

The Paradiddle of Being - Book Three: Just Be

The Paradiddle of Being — Book Three: Just Be

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Book Three: Just Be