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The Now Continuum

The sky bathes the harbor in cyan turquoise cadet-blue sea foam bubbles the only gorget one has versus the flamingos and canaries absconding littoral mire the gashes on my feet, the burn in my gracilis have returned me yet again to sanctum: la vie en rose, where lips breathe lunarias into drift bottles love songs the only tune in our ears, lilac mica on denim morpho is the heart in my chest, and the color of your hair when the sun decides its inevitable rest everything must come to an end, but the feeling I get when you scrunch your nose and shake wisteria dust off raven plumes eclipsing spinel opals and if describing them is the one thing I can do, then the paint in my mouth may go stale fingertips now pruney, lazy, tired vision indispensable falling pallid the paper of my visage a wrinkly, sallow pity but the young wish of a besotted soul to grow old with your puling orbs granted ink sinks the coral lens your darling hands have fixed over my head but my legs are torn, and my teeth broken aching for another laugh rumbling through your vibrating back that my cheek is pressed into, and I drown willing smile wistful hush still.

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Date: 4/25/2025 4:15:00 AM
I am so glad you commented on my page so that I could encounter yours. This is a magnificent set of scenes that are magically entangled yet sequestered imagery and emotions. I especially loved "then the paint in my mouth may go stale". Very lovely, a favorite for sure.
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/25/2025 4:21:00 AM
Thank you, B.J!! I'm a big fan of your poems! Happy to have you here on my page.
Date: 4/21/2025 10:36:00 AM
Amazing metaphors, with beautiful, beautiful writing, Hiba- <3
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/21/2025 11:52:00 AM
Paige, so pleased to see you on my page. Be Blessed <3
Date: 4/18/2025 7:47:00 AM
Dear Hiba, your poetic masterwork is a sumptuous sensory feast. I adore your lush imagery, lilting cadence, creative phrasing and rich metaphors "lips breathe lunarias into drift bottles" and " the paint in my mouth"- gorgeous! Exquisite magic moments cascade down the page.. alluring morsels that lure my heart and imagination into fascinating realms of life, love, joy, acknowledging the transience in all. Potent gold and beauty spills from your gifted poet's pen. Congratulations for your success In Seeker's contest. Warmest wishes, my soulful poet friend.. ~Susan
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/18/2025 8:15:00 AM
Susan you have put so much thought into this gorgeous, uplifting comment. Thank you. Thank you so much for that, and for reading in the first place. I appreciate every reader, and commenter <3
Date: 4/16/2025 5:49:00 AM
Lovely poem Hiba.
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/16/2025 7:09:00 AM
Appreciate it, ma'am.
Date: 4/16/2025 3:51:00 AM
How beautiful is this, dear hiba; your use of colors, and descriptive adjectives etc here is so creative and the way youv arranged words is like a long exhale of all pain and inhale of all that is gorgeous, i also love your mention of opals and wisteria too, and how youv ends the poem with "and I drown willing smile wistful hush still." serene! And calming! Pleasure reading your take on the line of enquiry. Congratulations on your placement in seekers contest. Sending you light always
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/16/2025 7:08:00 AM
Ah Ink, long time no see! It's a pleasure having you here. Thank you for your encouraging comment <33 I really appreciate it.
Date: 4/15/2025 1:42:00 PM
Oh, darlin', darlin' - your vocabulary supersedes mine in your beginning lines; but they are beauts leading to verses of outstanding imagery and feel. Some of your lines are so exquisite that I read them multiple times to savor them. A joy to read you again, to see you again. I think I remember the contest prompt and, if I'm right, you did a wonderful job. Love ... CayCay
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/15/2025 10:48:00 PM
so am I <3
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/15/2025 3:34:00 PM
I'm right 'here.'
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/15/2025 1:52:00 PM
I love your thoughtful feedback, dear friend. Thank you for your kind words <3 I've been missing you a lot these past few days. It's such a joy to hear from you again.
Date: 4/15/2025 1:37:00 PM
I haven't read the poem yet. I was so happy to see you on one of my poems this morning that I had to come hug you. You were on my mind last night before I fell asleep and I think I left messages here and there about your welfare. Sooo glad to see you, honey. I hope all is golden in your world. Love ... CayCay
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/15/2025 1:42:00 PM
Ah CayCay, I am so flattered to hear that you thought of me. Here's a gladly reciprocated loving hug back >^-^ <
Date: 4/13/2025 8:44:00 PM
fascinating write. intrigued at the ending of poem, ' I drown.. still.' powerful poem gifted poet. happy writing.
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/13/2025 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, thriveni <3
Date: 4/13/2025 8:16:00 PM
Wow! This is a beautiful gourmet of words for me. I've already looked up many words to better understand your magnificent poem. So far, to me, it's about a growing love over time for someone or something. Either way, beautifully done Hiba! <3 "p
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Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/13/2025 10:35:00 PM
Thank you so much, David for your lovely words :))
Date: 4/13/2025 1:29:00 PM
Note: There are a few (okay a lot) archaic and/or uncommon words in this poem, but I swear they exist. You can search em up, or let me know if you want me to add a glossary of my own interpretations of them <3
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