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The Lumberjack's Hard Days of Toil

The Lumberjack's Hard Days Of Toil Salty sweat, from deep axe strokes to lean hands heavy cotton shirt soaked, mark of the man. Lumberjack, strong, cut of a different breed hard at toil, to fulfill his family's need. With each hard day's task, his heart grew stronger morn to night, his time away seemed longer. Wife and children, rarely got to see dear dad yet all knew his sweet love and were truly glad. As his axe bit into hardest of trees mother sat at home shelling garden peas. Each one doing family duties and chores living sweet melodies of musical scores. Work done, rushed he, to family to rejoice duty performed with honor and by free choice. R.J. Lindley Sept. 16th , 1996 Syllables Per Line: 10 10 11 11 0 10 10 11 11 0 10 10 11 11 0 11 11 Total # Syllables: 148 Total # Words: 112 Note: My father started out as a lumberjack, back in the day when so much was done by strong hands and not ease of machines! To be a lumberjack back then meant that you were a strong man and willing to work hard. Both are strong and positive attributes. My Dad, later after several years decided to use his brains more and his arms less.. I remember he saying often, "Son use whichever you think best, strength or brains but regardless the free choice made -do so honestly, fairly and with honor! This poem, is dedicated to that man, the guy that saw honor in hard labor and in using intelligence to garner a brighter and better future. I have cut trees, carried and sawed logs, and split wood as a boy on the farm. TRUST ME, IT IS HARD BACK BREAKING WORK.. but it also yields positive dividends and builds good character in a man.

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Date: 4/21/2017 4:53:00 AM
Robert, I started reading your comments which I absolutely loved and then reading the poem was such a treat because it is as if your father leaped off that page. That was truly, truly, a wonderful experience. You are such a remarkable story teller/poet. A heartfelt 7:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/20/2017 10:06:00 PM
Coming from a farming background I can truly relate to this piece, Robert! I like what you have done here in this tribute to your father! I always learn from reading each and every one of your sonnets, and this is no exception! Another classic example of your great work my friend! A pleasure reading you this afternoon. 7+
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Date: 4/20/2017 6:26:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem..It has good flow, rhythm and rhyme..It reads as if your father was a man among men..Most want to use brains today but still there is some brawn out there that needs to be done..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/20/2017 12:12:00 PM
Hello Robert, A marvelous sonnet for sure and a great tribute to your father. Your sonnet presents a very descriptive picture of the nature of the work of lumberjacks. Excellent!! SEVEN!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 4/20/2017 10:02:00 AM
A wonderful write and tribute to your dad and all men of honor and to their faithful women! 7
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