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The Loving Sound-Collab Premiere Contest Winner

I enjoy being in tune with nature, As I sit, I hear such a loving sound. Reminded of God, our legislature. From this small hill, I hear him all around. Melodies of life flow through nature's core, Floating towards the one who sits on high. I heard soft notes as the tide came to shore. And I can sense his divine presence nigh. Joanna Daniel's part I enjoy this harmony with nature, Feeling close to God, as He calls me out, Each sound reveals His loving portraiture, He's alive in nature, there is no doubt. Songs of praise spark my pen, as I listen To birds chirruping in satisfaction. A thousand rays on the ocean glisten. Grateful am I for His benefaction. 03/23/2023 Rhyme Scheme: abab Contest: Collaborate With Me Sponsor: Joanna Daniel Syllable: 10/10/10/10/10/10/10/10 Rhyme Scheme: abab/abab Theme: Nature

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Date: 4/2/2023 12:47:00 PM
Ha I was right! Congrats
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Date: 3/30/2023 8:48:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end--- even with Jo's collaborating stanzas. God bless you.
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Date: 3/30/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations Alexis on your podium write. A wonderful collabopration.
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Date: 3/30/2023 8:14:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Alexis! Congratulations on your trophy win! :)
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Date: 3/30/2023 7:32:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this fab poem Alexis! :)
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:59:00 AM
Superb trophy win, Alexis! Warmest congratulations!
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:46:00 AM
Indeed a lovely poem, so spiritual in tone. Congratulations Alexis on your trophy win
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:19:00 AM
Hi Alexis, congratulations on your trophy win, it was a great poem right from the start and wonderful collaborating with you:)
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:47:00 AM
Hi Jo, I'm glad you liked it.You held a good contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Date: 3/29/2023 11:52:00 AM
I think you have a good chance to be chosen . If I were the judge , I'd be looking for ones easy to respond back to, and this one has that quality
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Date: 3/26/2023 3:34:00 PM
Alexis this is beautiful and it would be a lovely collaboration to do. Belle
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Date: 3/24/2023 12:45:00 PM
Curling up with you for the imagery is divine! God bless you, Alexis!
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Date: 3/23/2023 8:44:00 PM
Amen embrace all the beauty around us,. Love your poem of peace, love and beauty around us that so many miss.
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