The Harshest Trick

I strolled beneath a barren wood,
feeling maligned, misunderstood.
Late night attempts at cloning sheep
bore little else but lack of sleep.

My research grant had been denied,
so I, exhausted, bleary-eyed,
set out on foot to clear the mind,
to leave unfinished work behind.

I heard a scream from up ahead,
looked up and saw some steps that led
to a small cottage on the hill
whence that shriek came, so sharp and shrill.

Then, walking through the open door,
a feeling I'd been here before
soon filled me with a sense of dread,
a primal urge to bolt instead.

The light had gone from gloam to gloom,
the darkness, heavy, in the room.
Descending stairs, unknown below,
footprints gave off a creepy glow.

The tanks I saw gave me the sweats,
for there, familiar silhouettes:
suspended in that gelatin
were newly forming skeletons.

Enshrouded in the finest mesh,
they grew translucent, living flesh.
A figure fiddled with the tank,
and as he turned, my heart stopped, sank...

The harshest trick for Halloween:
for he was I, in ghastly sheen.

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for the Halloween Poetry Contest
sponsored by Emile Pinet
written on 10/25/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Bueckert Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 12:59 PM
Excellent and spooky Jeff, well deserved win, congrats!
Sands Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Congratulations for your win Jeff :)
Kyser Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Blessings, Heidi, I appreciate the read!
Flood Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:35 AM
Where’s John Carpenter when you need him? Great win, Jeff. Congrats. Terry
Kyser Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Channeling my inner Terry, lol - thanks for the read and comment!
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Oh the is eerie and wonderful Jeff! Awesomeness! Congratulations on your win! :)
Kyser Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Thanks, Linda - that was a fun write!
Pinet Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations Jeff! Your amazing poem "The Harshest Trick", has placed " Second" in my Halloween poetry contest. You should take pride, for I was very strict, but your poem rose to a podium placing. Very well done my friend, Emile.
Kyser Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Thanks for your consideration and for hosting the contest, Emile!
Hankins Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Wow, this really gave me goosebumps, Jeff. Good writing.
Kyser Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 9:22 AM
Thanks, Milt, I think it is time for some Thanksgiving and Christmas cheer!
Logan Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 6:18 AM
A script worthy of an episode of The Twilight Zone. Very 'Poeish,' Jeff.
Kyser Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 6:33 AM
Ha, thanks - fun stuff! I appreciate the read and comments as always!
Willason Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 6:06 AM
A very clever slight of words and demo of your rhyming skills. A like it...
Kyser Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 6:33 AM
Thanks, Paul - too many creepy contests here lately!
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