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The Harshest Trick

I strolled beneath a barren wood, feeling maligned, misunderstood. Late night attempts at cloning sheep bore little else but lack of sleep. My research grant had been denied, so I, exhausted, bleary-eyed, set out on foot to clear the mind, to leave unfinished work behind. I heard a scream from up ahead, looked up and saw some steps that led to a small cottage on the hill whence that shriek came, so sharp and shrill. Then, walking through the open door, a feeling I'd been here before soon filled me with a sense of dread, a primal urge to bolt instead. The light had gone from gloam to gloom, the darkness, heavy, in the room. Descending stairs, unknown below, footprints gave off a creepy glow. The tanks I saw gave me the sweats, for there, familiar silhouettes: suspended in that gelatin were newly forming skeletons. Enshrouded in the finest mesh, they grew translucent, living flesh. A figure fiddled with the tank, and as he turned, my heart stopped, sank... The harshest trick for Halloween: for he was I, in ghastly sheen. ---------- for the Halloween Poetry Contest sponsored by Emile Pinet written on 10/25/22

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Date: 11/30/2022 12:59:00 PM
Excellent and spooky Jeff, well deserved win, congrats!
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Date: 11/30/2022 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Jeff :)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/30/2022 11:46:00 AM
Blessings, Heidi, I appreciate the read!
Date: 11/30/2022 10:35:00 AM
Where’s John Carpenter when you need him? Great win, Jeff. Congrats. Terry
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/30/2022 11:46:00 AM
Channeling my inner Terry, lol - thanks for the read and comment!
Date: 11/30/2022 10:34:00 AM
Oh the is eerie and wonderful Jeff! Awesomeness! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/30/2022 11:46:00 AM
Thanks, Linda - that was a fun write!
Date: 11/30/2022 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jeff! Your amazing poem "The Harshest Trick", has placed " Second" in my Halloween poetry contest. You should take pride, for I was very strict, but your poem rose to a podium placing. Very well done my friend, Emile.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 11/30/2022 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for your consideration and for hosting the contest, Emile!
Date: 10/25/2022 8:09:00 AM
Wow, this really gave me goosebumps, Jeff. Good writing.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/25/2022 9:22:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, I think it is time for some Thanksgiving and Christmas cheer!
Date: 10/25/2022 6:18:00 AM
A script worthy of an episode of The Twilight Zone. Very 'Poeish,' Jeff.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/25/2022 6:33:00 AM
Ha, thanks - fun stuff! I appreciate the read and comments as always!
Date: 10/25/2022 6:06:00 AM
A very clever slight of words and demo of your rhyming skills. A like it...
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/25/2022 6:33:00 AM
Thanks, Paul - too many creepy contests here lately!

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