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The Dream

It was something
that brought a smile
to my face.

It had unusual underpinnings
with desirable overtones,
a pleasurable experience

as I wandered aimlessly
through concoctions Neanderthal
perpetuations ministered aloft

in dreams drearily
bound by time, space
glittery amidst synchronizing

to a land of make-believe
where all desires
could be fulfilled

it tantalized senses
drifting through subconscious
perplexity illuminating

dismal repercussions stifled
by cold truths.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/11/2018 4:42:00 PM
We awake from dreaming and to a different kind of dream. nicely put together Frank
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Date: 6/26/2017 1:57:00 AM
nice write Frank :) beautifully worded
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Date: 5/15/2017 10:34:00 AM
Sounds like a roller-coaster of a dream! Starts sensual, turns primitive, ends cold.
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Date: 5/5/2017 2:58:00 PM
That last line was unexpected as the ending :) It's a nice poem... dreams can be so nice sometimes.
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Date: 4/28/2017 12:34:00 AM
Neanderthals we are in our unconscious but very dominant existence ... Well written one ... One thing I am suggesting ... Hope you will not mind ... Showing things objectively brings in more appeal than description ...
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Date: 4/19/2017 1:02:00 PM
A wonderful dreamy write, Frank.
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