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The Critically Acclaimed

The fault finding
Pertaining to thought
Introspect do you think?
As when thinking
for crying out loud
Are you rationing it?
Object of thought
judging for oneself
How is it critical?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/26/2015 1:28:00 AM
Congrats, John, well done. regards, Viv
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John Beam
Date: 10/26/2015 7:18:00 PM
Thanks, Viv and I you have a good day.
Date: 10/25/2015 5:32:00 PM
congrats on the winners' list, John
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John Beam
Date: 10/26/2015 7:20:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I hope you have a wonderful day
Date: 10/25/2015 3:36:00 PM
congrats on your win John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Beam
Date: 10/26/2015 7:21:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I hope you have blessed day.
Date: 10/25/2015 1:33:00 PM
Upon reading this one again, I should have rated it higher. I think the lack of space between the Questionku may have led to me not placing it as high. I do appreciate the thought you put into it.
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John Beam
Date: 10/26/2015 7:23:00 PM
Thanks for your rating. I have had some trouble with editor page and spacing. I hope to get better.
Date: 10/16/2015 9:19:00 PM
Great questions, John! I'm new to this form so still wondering.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/16/2015 10:29:00 PM
That is a very good idea.... I went ahead and wet my toes and entered one.
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John Beam
Date: 10/16/2015 10:26:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Eve. this poem was more about critical thinking, rather than form but maybe, we need an Answerku 6,5,4 or 3,2,1 to figure it out.:) I enjoyed writing it anyways.

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