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I had heard about a ... a writer's group ... in my city where a writer could recite their poem or short story on a stage with an audience I decided on a poem ... of my heritage ~ a feather lost, gliding and drifting, it soars in the mighty wind, it twirls and swirls once the 'People' owned all the wilderness ~ I was so nervous and trembled for days I worked on memorizing the lines of my poem making all my friends listen over and over again speaking it to a mirror with smiles .. and no smiles ~ there, upon a sheer jagged cliff an appaloosa horse of many colors stands majestic and this Ojibwe girl gazes under an azure sky ~ we had to listen to several talkers before my turn they were so good that my heart sank I would look like a fool ... to my friends but when my name was announced I gathered up my 'courage' and strength and stepped ... on the stage ... standing silent for a moment ~ there, in the mighty wind that roars and howls eagle feathers in my hair and on my horse flutter and the vast lands of Canada seek the horizon ~ when I finished reciting my poem there was a deafening quiet the audience fallen silent I take a breath and look around the room oh, why were people so still ... and then ... the sound of cheers ring out and all the audience stands ... to clap for this Ojibwe girl ... ~ there, above in that cloudless sky canopy eagles fly ... symbolizing the spirit and strength of the 'People' and the only sound ... those fluttering feathers in the wind ~ .. and a feather lost ... drifts into the audience ___________________ May 6, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/the audience falls silent Copyright Protected, ID 05-1352-902-06 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, The Audience Falls Silent sponsor, Kai Michael Neumann, Judged 06/02/2021

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Date: 5/11/2021 3:25:00 PM
Hello Constance, I enjoyed this poem. You are a great story teller. Love Darlene enjoy your evening. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/12/2021 10:10:00 AM
Hello Constance, I hope all is well 2ith you. You are welcome my friend. Love, Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2021 4:22:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for the comment and compliment, love _Constance
Date: 5/7/2021 9:37:00 AM
Lovely...Are you really an Ojibwe girl?
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Constance La France
Date: 5/7/2021 9:42:00 AM
Arturo, thank you for the compliment, I am part Ojibwe, my grandma was brought up white but found her roots later in life, I am more like her than all the other grandchildren, she was a storyteller, I am a storyteller, peace _Constance
Date: 5/7/2021 8:53:00 AM
This is beautiful! "the sound of cheers ring out and all the audience stands ... to clap for this Ojibwe girl ... " Wow! Congrats.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/7/2021 9:43:00 AM
Caren, thank you for the compliment and comment, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 5/6/2021 11:48:00 AM
Wow I absolutely love this! A FAVE for me. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2021 2:49:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for the compliment, this is very meaningful for me, I had brought eagle feathers with me to hold while I recited my poem and one actually fluttered away into the audience and thanks for the FAV, love _Constance
Date: 5/6/2021 11:13:00 AM
Constance, what a lovely, intriguing tale within your poem... A sure winner! I love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2021 2:50:00 PM
Gina, thanks so much for the compliment and encouragement, I hope Kai likes it too, love _Constance
Date: 5/6/2021 9:53:00 AM
Dear Constance, awesome! Find it hard to describe how impressed I am. You are such a creative poet - no wonder the audience fell silent after listening to your poem. Love and BW ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2021 2:54:00 PM
Mala, thank you for the amazing compliment, yes, you are right it really happened I recited my poem to an audience- the group is called the Ottawa Storytellers and they meet once a month, but since Cov 19 hit, they have sadly not, I really hope they start up again when it is safe, love _Constance

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