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The Ancient Viking Warrior In His Old Age - a Collaboration With Robert

Part - 1. Biding his time, as each day wrangles its hours away his soul resting between heaven and Hade's hot fires for wanton desires shall demand highest of life's pay from blood flowing until care and want expires battles fought that would frighten warriors true brave all for golden treasures that he once, others gave. Where not his saddest sorrows rightly born to flay conquering dark dread of night to soothe brightest day within such journey, pain must be given free reign present heart shattered, as for invincibility he prays for stubborn pride's cost, once immense evil befell blinded young lad, willingly sent into battles legends tell. From soil with streaming-red and dying's loudest moans weeping ground, from brave warriors cut and fallen clamouring with Viking swords clashing, wars evilest tones inviting Valkyries to swoop up, those dead and death-callin' as Valhalla watches battle, with its deadliest of foes darkness marshals powerful forces, to their powers show! Biding time, sweet life has wrangled its hours away as soul awaits trip to Valhalla or Hade's hot fires for wanton desires shall demand highest of blood's pay from red-streams a'flowin' until care and want soon expires battles fought that would frighten warriors truest and brave for earthen gains that once taken, are back too soon gave. Part - 2. Stagnating in the darkness, the old man waits, what fate shall befall his ancient bones? His breath comes short and life hesitates, for all of his wrongs his heart atones. In his thoughts, once more he was a youth, his memories holding his life's truth, Many ancient oceans he had explored, in battle's thunder, a power in shield wall, oh, maidens weep, for they he adored, within death's struggles this Viking had stood tall, with power and might he never knew defeat, no enemy alive had made this man retreat. Now in the darkness, his inner flame does dim, his eyes fly open, his hand he does raise, He feels his youth when his life was filled to the brim, his accomplishments, he knew, had all earned praise, sword placed in his hand, now close to his breast, now he hardens himself for the final test. Then he does cry put in a mighty voice, "Odin, Father! bring your sword son home, now he must wait the final choice, has he earned his place or darkness shall he roam, (The decision made,) Off to |Valhalla, to sit in golden halls, to sing songs of glory, until final battle calls. Always a pleasure and an honour to collaborate with you Robert.

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Date: 4/8/2019 11:51:00 AM
all I can say is Wow! you do collaboration with style. I also enjoyed your poem with Pandita. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 4/2/2019 4:58:00 AM
You both make a really great team. This is a wonderful collaboration! Sorry I havent been around, I have been under the weather. Hugs, Connie : )
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 8/26/2019 2:45:00 PM
Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by our collaboration, it is much appreciated. When I knew what the collaboration was about, I had to be a part of it. I am so glad that Robert came up with the idea. There is no way I wasn't doing it. I am so glad you liked our piece Connie. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/31/2019 2:46:00 AM
Mike, you're a great story teller...
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/31/2019 2:06:00 PM
Hi Pashang, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaborations, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked our piece. I do love all things Viking. When Robert sent me his wonderful words I had to add mine. It is always a pleasure and an honour to collaborate with Robert. Have a wonderful Sunday. hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/30/2019 12:59:00 PM
Really enjoyed the story telling here.. From two talented and experienced poets And congrats on potd
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/31/2019 1:01:00 PM
Hi Silent, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of The Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. When Robert sent me his wonderful words I knew I would be doing this collaboration. Iy is an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Robert. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/26/2019 5:07:00 PM
Hi Mike and Robert - what an epic poem - congratulations to the two of you on been awarded this honor. this is a historical gem! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 10:33:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of The Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It came as a pleasant surprise. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Robert. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/26/2019 2:47:00 PM
When I read the title, I knew it would be very emotional. This takes me to another time and place. Congratulations Mike and Robert, on Poem of the Day. A wonderful collaboration. ~ Brandy
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 10:20:00 AM
Hi Brandy, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of the Day, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It did come as a most pleasant surprise. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Robert. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/26/2019 12:31:00 PM
Hey Mike & Robert, I was hoping this poem would get the recognition it deserves. Back with congrats to the both of you on your very well done collaboration. All the very best my friends. Charlie
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 10:12:00 AM
Hi Charles, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of The Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Robert. This Poem Of The Day came as a pleasant surprise. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/26/2019 9:53:00 AM
Sinner and saint in one!!!! Wonderful classic poetry. Congratulations to you both!
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 10:04:00 AM
Hi Sunlite, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of the Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It cam as a most pleasant surprise. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Robert. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/26/2019 8:40:00 AM
Vladislav Raven congratulations on your poem of the day....
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Date: 3/30/2019 9:45:00 AM
Hi Okonkwo, thank you for dropping by with your congratulations on our Poem Of The Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It did come as a pleasant surprise, It is always an honour nd a pleasure to collaborate with Robert. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend....Mike.
Date: 3/26/2019 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 9:37:00 AM
Hi Heidi, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of The Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It did come as a most pleasant surprise. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Robert. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/26/2019 7:53:00 AM
Congratulation my friend, Vladislav. A fine honor for a beautiful POTD!
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 9:28:00 AM
Hi Demetrius, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of the Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It came as a most pleasant surprise. It is always a pleasure and honour to work with Robert. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/26/2019 7:22:00 AM
We are transported to another realm...exquisitely executed by two fine poetic masters of their craft...Congrats!!! are in order, for POTD!!...love & light dear friends...^WW^...off to Valhalla lol
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Date: 3/30/2019 9:23:00 AM
Hi John, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of the Day, it is much appreciated. we are glad you liked the piece. It came as a pleasant surprise yo find the piece as Poem Of the Day. It is always an honour and pleasure to write with Robert. have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/26/2019 6:49:00 AM
Warm Congratulations to you both for your brilliant POTD! xomo x2
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 9:11:00 AM
Hi Maureen, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of the Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It was an honour and a pleasure to work on this piece with Robert. This has been a most pleasant surprise. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/26/2019 6:35:00 AM
- An awesome writing from ancient history in time, Mike and Robert - Congratulations to both of you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 9:00:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, thank you for dropping by and the congratulations on our Poem Of the Day, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and pleasure to collaborate with Robert. It always seems so easy, for his words are always so engaging and special. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/26/2019 6:06:00 AM
A master piece of poetry...Congratulations to you both...
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 8:32:00 AM
Hi Arturo, thank you for droppping by and the comment on our Poem Of The Day. it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Robert. I do love writing on Vikings. Another wonderful collaboration with Robert. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/26/2019 2:48:00 AM
They were a force to be reckoned with, fierce warriors, death didn't scare them as they knew what awaited them in Valhalla in the great halls of the warriors. Congratulations Mike and Robert on POTD. Tom.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/27/2019 9:47:00 PM
Hi Tom, we thank you for your congratulations on our Poem Of the Day, it is much appreciated. It has come as a most pleasant surprise. Have a wonderful thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/24/2019 9:29:00 PM
WOW Mike, what a masterpiece. This is some fine writing my dear friend. Your ink is gold as is Robert's. A great collaboration in this amazing world of poetry. You write beautiful, don't ever stop. Have a nice evening and I hope you had a blessed Sunday...Charlie
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/27/2019 9:41:00 PM
Hi Charles, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration. It is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to write with Robert. He made the writing of my part so easy for me. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/24/2019 2:13:00 PM
Mike thank you so much for accepting my offer and writing with me yet again. Your great verses concluding this piece are truly exceptional and I could not have asked for a better ending to this tale of an aged warrior finally reaping his longed for reunification with his brother-in arms, in Valhalla's golden realm of the very bravest of warriors..
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/30/2019 8:52:00 AM
Hi Robert, it has been an honour and a pleasure to work on this Viking write with you. Your opening stanzas did awaken my imagination and my words did flow. The content did sing to me. I always love to write on Vikings. Thank you for thinking of me when the idea of the write came to your mind. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/24/2019 9:31:00 PM
Just wonderful and amazing. see my comment to Mike above. The same to you too my dear friend. Charlie
Date: 3/24/2019 11:27:00 AM
I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. Hugs....Mike. XX
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