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Telescope Peering Into Days of Yore

A bundle from the past - the 1930’s and ‘40’s. A wisp of his breath…I’m breathless. Did he know his love story would last? 1941 envelope - my fingers glide over the sleeve. I tenderly take out the note, the sweet poetry…telescope peering into the days of yore. Grandpa won his sweetheart with words: “From a worthless bum,” a treasure, Grandma and their progeny adore. Love poems, other’s curious. One bespeaks of “…is it murder to help someone dying…in pain. Contemplation or serious? The carrier, my sister, brought back from her travels photos, too. …and I thought of my mother her photo, now, an afterthought. The sentiment held in my heart. Illustrious words and still lifes my mind ponders as I grow old. ‘Tis true, one day too, I’ll depart. I’ll take my time reading the words - I read some to my attentive spouse. How lovely we shared that moment - the nectar of two hummingbirds. 7/6/2022

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Date: 7/14/2022 3:18:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Date: 7/11/2022 9:11:00 PM
This is such a marvelous tribute to your grandparent's love!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 7/7/2022 1:59:00 PM
They are fun to read. What jumps out is, how much better they were at expressing themselves than the young people of today. Really dumb-downed generation. "“…is it murder to help someone dying…in pain. Contemplation or serious?" If it is because they are unhappy -- get them professional help. It they refuse, it is their spiritual choice not ours. I would do nothing that could prolong such suffering.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:46:00 PM
The expressiveness is so much better. Thank you, Joe!
Date: 7/7/2022 8:19:00 AM
"How lovely we shared that moment - the nectar of two hummingbirds." A precious phrase to me. It makes me think of my wife and our oneness. Aging does bring many thoughts and many memories to re-examine and refelect upon. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Kim. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:47:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry too, dear friend!
Date: 7/7/2022 3:35:00 AM
Like the concept of the poetry telescope! How unique, Kim. I have a birthday card from my Grandpa when I was a year old. Cards were so pretty. Grandpa had a shaky hand, but I cherish that card. I have many letters from relatives long gone. Thank God. What happens in this age of delete? Emojis are fun, but cannot replace words. Love, Panagiota.xxx Words connect us Rare is the person who will take time to be personal and write more than three lines…those who can, bless them.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:44:00 PM
There is a unique card in this grouping too! Thanks for your support and I agree with you - a lot is lost without letter writing.
Date: 7/7/2022 1:27:00 AM
Keep the memories alive. They are full of worth. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:42:00 PM
Yes they are! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/6/2022 9:59:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem of precious memories, and peering into the past. Best wishes, Evelyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:41:00 PM
Thanj you, Evelyn! Best wishes!
Date: 7/6/2022 9:33:00 PM
May 'the nectar of two hummingbirds' span the generations of your family, Kim. Love the sincere loading of sentimentality here. ~ Paterfamilias Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much! :)

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