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swirling seven-stars

Life is never a planned ride on a magical carpet, that awakens jasmine dreams lost in the brisk air. We weave our own zest of zephyr, to tailor-stitch a tapestry; buttoned with zeal, cuff-linked with faith, designed in silence~ fragranced with forgiveness... We forget to appreciate dusky clouds carrying crooning rainbows, when mists of memories, shroud the lemongrass lace of velvety eventides~ As twisted thoughts wade through a lachrymose web of thistles~ skies drizzle tear-stained diamonds. There was a time when my consciousness refused to seek mulberry streaks of halcyon light, flickering beyond cluttered chaos carved in confusion, for I've long waltzed through drowsy darkness~ that circles around the kundalini spirits, stealing sacred energy like vicious vultures intoxicated by the fickle flavors of fleeting seasons. I ponder, would I have found clarity, if I had abandoned the bleeding dreariness that dragged me towards an abyss of angst? Perhaps, I shall find the sunsets that slumber behind wintry eyes, to heal this ebony skin that hides bruised veins. So tonight as I listen to the rain serenade the silence that swirls between my aching heartbeats, I find serenity cascade like whistling waterfalls, calming inner-fears, as I let go of the shadows lurking behind the angels that guard enticing temptations, tethered by false narratives. Here in the rising glows of ineffable moonlight, I've seen the seven-stars sparkling around auroras, dancing to the symphonies of truth interwoven with rouge reveries of today's twilight, wiping away whiffs of yesterday's blurred visions, and unseen truth of tomorrows, as the choir of mindfulness orchestrates a magnolia melody, where every infinite rhythm reflects the virtuous sound of butterfly bliss fluttering~ along mirthful chambers, within the sobriety of my heart.

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Date: 2/19/2024 10:01:00 AM
Excellent and bedazzling work! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/18/2024 12:18:00 PM
Dear Empress, soulful poetess, textured imagery and rich metaphors dance from your golden pen to delicately pirouette down the poetic page to the rhythmic beating of your expressive heart, enchanted from the depths of your soul. Beautifully revealing. The struggle is real, and so is the healing. A poignant introspective delivered with creative poetic finesse. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. So honored to share the podium with you. Your artistry shines! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/25/2024 7:15:00 AM
A lovely piece. Congratulations on your medal.
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:11:00 PM
Spectacular congrats dear
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Date: 1/24/2024 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement dear poet..
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:40:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well--deserved win dear, Ink.
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Date: 1/23/2024 9:28:00 PM
Oh, each time I read you I wonder how one can write this way..... a torrential flow of emotions that cascade down uninterrupted .....! Life is never a planned ride and the river of life rarely takes the course we envisage ! But we can tailor life with experience and greater self introspection and on deciding not to be plagued by inner fears "So tonight as I listen to the rain serenade the silence that swirls between my aching heartbeats,I find serenity cascade like whistling waterfalls, calming inner-fears," This positive attitude lets a lot of sunshine into our lives. Prodigiously gifted, I am happy to see Hiya and Empress sharing first and second places in this contest. Hearty Congratulations!
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Date: 1/23/2024 1:12:00 AM
Oh my, dear fairy goddess, this is such a deep and heartfelt poem that reflects life in its soul stirring essence..How it unveils unplanned circumstances and letting us sway in an abyss of confusion wrapped in mists of memories which prevent us from appreciating every moment..This made me feel so much,especially, those questionings where we introspect our souls,if it had found peace within stillness rather than in waves of angst, perhaps, it would've given more clarity.Your metaphors and imagery
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Date: 1/23/2024 1:15:00 AM
are absolutely astounding here with impeccable use of colours, alliteration and vivid vocabulary that's enhancing the meaningful rhythm of your words... "that circles around the kundalini spirits, stealing sacred energy" Wowww i love that! "I've seen the seven-stars sparkling around auroras" I could resonate with everything that you've described so skillfully here, dear poetess.. Sending best wishes for the contest.. Keep writing and shining always!
Date: 1/21/2024 4:00:00 PM
Just beautiful- your soul must have searched this one out. I, too, am a standpoint in my life right now. Always a pleasure and gift to read your beautiful writing.
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Date: 1/20/2024 5:24:00 PM
You've masterfully touched upon many topics...life's challenges, inner peace, living in the now. Your words spoke of healing and about setting your soul free by living in the now, joyful and carefree....such powerful and uplifting words. As always, your imagery is outstanding and beautiful...a skill of which I am in awe. Best wishes with the contest...hugs, Sara
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/21/2024 6:42:00 AM
Thank you do much for the wishes and your kind and uplifting comment truly im grateful always for your poetic presence
Date: 1/20/2024 3:30:00 PM
I realize this is a contest poem and I am not a judge, so I am compelled into rubber stamp generics. ~Jude, "The lack of joy is a stupified stupor, the zombie virus of fear." Love this.
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/21/2024 6:49:00 AM
Hah thats ok dear jude, i still appreciate yoyr generic Comments which are so meaningful: thank you so much
Date: 1/20/2024 1:37:00 PM
Such a fantastic poem about the journey of self-discovery and finding inner peace amidst life's struggles, dear Ink. You use vivid and evocative language to convey the emotional depth of the narrator's journey. The use of imagery, such as "jasmine dreams," "fragranced with forgiveness," and "tear-stained diamonds," creates a rich sensory experience for the reader. You also use literary devices such as metaphor ("zest of zephyr," "buttoned with zeal"). I know seeker will like this. BOL.
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Date: 1/20/2024 1:08:00 PM
Yes, the clinging. That was a powerful message. It's not easy to move on. Thank you. Another great poem to your credit, Ink.
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Date: 1/20/2024 9:43:00 AM
"Awakening from dreariness and finding rhythms that reflect butterfly bliss", Beautifully penned Empress
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Date: 1/20/2024 8:23:00 AM
Looks like my comment did not go through. Anyway this is divine, Ink. The last verse was so important to pulling it all together too.
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Date: 1/20/2024 7:25:00 AM
Wonderfully dwelling in exploration of feelings that ebb and flow--a forlorn yet inspirational depiction, Ink. I like your excellent vocabulary, as always, my friend. Superb ending: it’s not desire per say but the clinging ~ that stifles soul and stops heart from singing...
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/20/2024 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Vijay. The last lines is the line of enquiry by seeker he is brilliant and his lines are very poetic. I agree thank you also for praising my vocabulary etc i appreciate you always
Date: 1/20/2024 6:27:00 AM
I've noticed over the years your writes tend to have a common theme: healing. Whether from a personal self-inflicted crisis, someone causing you extreme angst or a lover who hurt you deeply, you always manage to find the ray of light somehow, at least in your poetry. Well done on this Ink
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/20/2024 8:20:00 AM
Dear Tomsz, you are such a mindful reader, thank you so very much for always encouraging me and for lifting me up with your sincere and thoughtful feedback. I appreciate it truly. Yes i always choose light over darkness although deep within we are all healing from things. Its always a pleasure having you here. Hope your weekend goes well
Date: 1/20/2024 2:43:00 AM
I admire how your poem is a poignant reflection on the unpredictability and complexity of life, woven with vivid imagery and introspective musings. The metaphor of life as an unplanned ride on a magical carpet sets the stage for a journey filled with both challenges and moments of beauty.. It brings the impact of awakening into a poetic realm.. Your quill skilfully uses rich and sensory language to convey the intricacies of existence, from weaving one's own emotions with the "zest of zephyr"
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/20/2024 8:21:00 AM
Your admiration means alot to me dear silent one! Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such detailed feedback means alot that you take time to read my long poems
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Date: 1/20/2024 2:44:00 AM
to the poetic description of clouds carrying "crooning rainbows." The contrast between the appreciation of natural wonders and the struggles with memories and twisted thoughts adds depth to the narrative.. Best of luck in the contest dear..
Date: 1/20/2024 2:01:00 AM
How do you write everyday ? So beautifully … always a great write .
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/20/2024 8:21:00 AM
Haha ah i dunno was in too much pain had to somehow write something. And tom woody, thank you always truly
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/20/2024 6:25:00 AM
I know, right? She is a well spring of endless inspiration
Date: 1/20/2024 1:52:00 AM
Life is never a planned ride on a magical carpet,.. aaaah if only it was aee.. I can fairytale all day all night aee.. buttoned with zeal,cuff-linked with faith, designed in silence.. mmm damn love the heaviness papi.. bleeding dreariness that dragged me towards an abyss of angst? Mmmm that imagery is hauntingly gorgeous!. rising glows of ineffable moonlight, seven-stars sparkling around auroras, mmmmm the elements r breathtaking here.. in love with the architecture of your piece.. flows effortlessly
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/20/2024 8:21:00 AM
Papi u da best

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