Sun down in Death Valley

Sun down in Death Valley

The memory of white branded heat
Falls away so fast
Dissolving in flashes of sagebrush shadows
The long flat bands of sand
Submerged in desert darkness, the sky
A wall of impassive indigo
The moon a ghost, ancient
When the sun was young
To walk this vast
Wind pricked emptiness
Is to feel the grim beauty of nature
As our dust parched pioneers did
As windows of timeless reverence
Here is abandonded the
Plushy comforts of convenience
Here, the night gives you nothing
But silence and stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Crandall Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 9:08 PM
I have great memories of the California desert along 395 as a kid, all that quiet and those stars, the smell of sage, though I never made it to Death Valley. I wish I could snap my fingers and experience that again. Anyway, you captured what to me is its magic.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 9:40 PM
Oh, I have been through Death Valley many times. Vast, and hot. Great poem, you did this very well, I can remember it so well!
Hind Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Nice edit. It's better, still beautiful.
Hind Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 7:20 PM
This is so deep, many lines I liked "The memory of white branded heat" "To walk this vast Wind pricked emptiness Is to feel the grim beauty of nature" desert dwellers, we can be
Goldsmith Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 11:17 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "It is to Be" write. Great Ending... Just silence and stars can make for a nice night sky. Have a wonderful Sunday writing away.........
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