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Sun down in Death Valley

Sun down in Death Valley

The memory of white branded heat
Falls away so fast
Dissolving in flashes of sagebrush shadows
The long flat bands of sand
Submerged in desert darkness, the sky
A wall of impassive indigo
The moon a ghost, ancient
When the sun was young
To walk this vast
Wind pricked emptiness
Is to feel the grim beauty of nature
As our dust parched pioneers did
As windows of timeless reverence
Here is abandonded the
Plushy comforts of convenience
Here, the night gives you nothing
But silence and stars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/9/2025 9:40:00 PM
Oh, I have been through Death Valley many times. Vast, and hot. Great poem, you did this very well, I can remember it so well!
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Date: 5/5/2025 7:49:00 PM
Nice edit. It's better, still beautiful.
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Date: 5/2/2025 7:20:00 PM
This is so deep, many lines I liked "The memory of white branded heat" "To walk this vast Wind pricked emptiness Is to feel the grim beauty of nature" desert dwellers, we can be
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Date: 4/27/2025 11:17:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "It is to Be" write. Great Ending... Just silence and stars can make for a nice night sky. Have a wonderful Sunday writing away.........
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