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Suck It and Read

Now where does one start to write To find the courage he has to pluck And write a poem for a contest It's all about things that suck Out there, there are so many places Where this word can always be used There are octopuses in our seas And their suckers are used so true Even in the medical world They use leeches to reduce blood swelling Their active anticoagulant Is a marvel in their telling There are women of ill repute Nothing like sucking on a sweet A hard neck never deters them Vampire bats do it to eat There are others in the animal world Yes, limpets when they grip their locked And back to the ladies and ******** Yes the sweetie I meant was rock Then there are the ones who are gullible Like a vacuum they become sucked in There is nothing wrong with the word suck Using it, is never a sin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/1/2011 10:18:00 PM
well, i surely know more now bout... the theme. great peace :D
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:33:00 PM
A delightful slurp....well written!
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Date: 10/24/2011 8:38:00 AM
Yes, I completely agree with you, James. This is a very thoughtful writing :)
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Date: 10/21/2011 7:02:00 PM
Flows fantastically off the tongue, truly well written...congrats to you in the contest...luv shannon
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Date: 10/11/2011 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Nancy's contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2011 10:39:00 PM
Congrats James on your HM in this contest with grand words expressing the theme so well luv..enjoy honor...
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Date: 10/10/2011 9:46:00 PM
This may be the suckiest poem I've ever read. Dig it!! Thanks so much, James, for the write and for supporting my contest. Namaste~N
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Date: 10/9/2011 6:24:00 PM
oh! woe!!! ahhh! love it..,,have yourself a wonderful Sunday~ ;-) take care,..p.d.
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Date: 10/8/2011 8:35:00 PM
A poem that uses the word suck so much; and yet it would be a sin to say your poem and suck in the same sentence. :)
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