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They sure have changed the mould for 'grammas!'

gramma removes teeth... glasses, four limbs... stark naked ~ down to the fine hairs November 07,, 2019 Sexyku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux

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Date: 11/10/2019 7:15:00 AM
In Nabokov's novel "Bend Sinister", there is an episode: the protagonist see in dream his wife undress. It's something like that) A great stripping. As far as I can see, Richard prefers younger dancers)
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/11/2019 2:23:00 AM
This is a novel in English, my curious friend)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/10/2019 1:04:00 PM
Who can blame Richard? LOL... As for Nabokov: Maybe I should have time-machined this poem to him! LOL. Oh, well. ~ gw
Date: 11/9/2019 4:27:00 AM
Oh, man, this is exciting to watch!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2019 7:40:00 PM
Ha, ha! Different strokes for different folks, as the saying goes... My sultry granny didn't seem to excite Richard Lamoreaux. (Another N/A in the contest). LOL. Hope Richard's viewing something a bit sexier. Just kidding there. :) gw
Date: 11/7/2019 4:45:00 PM
lol Gershon. There's not much left of Gramma. Oh the vision you leave to one's imagination.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/7/2019 6:44:00 PM
Hmm. Reflecting now, I should have left more to the imagination. LOL... Perhaps I should have left her in fans or feathers, ala Sally Rand (or whatever her name was). Thanks for the fun feedback, Lin! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/7/2019 3:39:00 PM
LOL. Thank you for the laugh today Gershon. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/7/2019 3:48:00 PM
Happy to read that you caught the humor in this one, Heidi, and thanks for your unflagging support. Much appreciated. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/7/2019 3:05:00 PM
Well that is a different take on the contest, I guess when you get older, some things change!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/7/2019 3:35:00 PM
Ha, ha! Exactly right: You could care less what other people think anymore. LOL. ~ Joan of Arc