Strawberry

Written: April 19, 2025, for contest sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich ********* Superb strawberry cake Spilling with fresh, sweet scent, Stiff blend of tart sweetness Stale candle oozes dream! Scenes of cadence wrapped in, Sweet and creamy milkshake, Sublime dance arises!

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Valsa George

Date: 4/28/2025 8:51:00 PM

Dear friend, back to your poem with Congratulations on your placement.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2025 2:38:00 PM

I didn't get the line with stale, but I liked the beginning two lines and last two lines of this one. Congrats in my contest.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/28/2025 6:48:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the contest and also for my placement. BTW, stale means decay, so the 4th line could be like this: decayed candles, induce dreams.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2025 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Strawberry" write. I love this wonderful fruit. They were in my fruit last night. I made strawberry cake the other day. Have a blessed day with your win.......

Valsa George

Date: 4/21/2025 9:07:00 PM

You have carried it to another level, dear Lasaad! My taste buds are stimulated by your pleiades and also by the scent emanating from your strawberry cake. I am sure this must be inviting. Usually I make carrot cake and for Christmas, a plum cake.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/21/2025 10:25:00 AM

Beautiful! I think the title has to be the foodname of what youv written about? Strawberry maybe? Im not sure dr sotto! I prefer always chocolate but this pleiades did make me crave for some strawberry cake!i love the oozes dream line the most! Best wishes for the contest! A very creative and delicious pleiades this is! Sending you light