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Springtime Rapture

The air has lost that Winter freeze and beautiful nature is awakening again. Soon we will see baby animals and the yellow bees will be buzzing happy, the flowers will be blooming. Oh, hello blue skies and warm breeze kisses. I long to pick a bright wildflower bouquet and watch a bunny hopping and a butterfly drift. Soon, outside my bedroom window there will be chirping, I love the spring flowers in Canada. The daffodils, crocus, and the violets. Not long till the farms will be flourishing and country markets will be selling. of course, there will be rainfall, but that is why they invented the galoshes, and umbrellas. I cannot wait till I can garden again with my hands in soil, it is joyful to watch your flowers and plants grow. The lilacs will burst forth with a fragrant scent in the air and all will be sun-kissed and vibrant pretty. and my world will be picture perfect, awake and thriving . . . rain washes away the remains of winter - my garden sighs rapture _______________________ March 12, 2021 Poetry/Haibun/Springtime Rapture Copyright Protected, ID 03-1335-862-12 All Rights Reservd, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Springtime Haibun, sponsor, M. L. Kiser, Judged 04/05/2021 Tenth Place

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Date: 4/20/2021 8:18:00 AM
Enjoyed your descriptive winning Haibun. Congrats on this winner. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 4/20/2021 11:10:00 AM
Sara, thanks for the compliment and congrats, love _Constance
Date: 4/5/2021 6:41:00 PM
So awesome! Congratulations on your win with this lovely Haibun. More power on your pen!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2021 9:10:00 AM
JCB, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, power to the pen _Constance
Date: 3/14/2021 5:45:00 AM
This is full of joy and optimism. Baby animals was a terrific touch.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2021 4:48:00 PM
Caren, thanks for the visiting and for the compliment _Constance
Date: 3/12/2021 11:31:00 AM
Lovely work, Constance. I read your paragraph and thought, "O come soon, sweet spring!" Good luck in the contest. I sense a clear winner!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2021 4:20:00 PM
Milton, thanks for the compliment on my Haibun, well we can never be sure until the contest is finalized _Constance
Date: 3/12/2021 9:56:00 AM
Oh, your poem makes me long for spring even more, Constance. Those lilacs do have a wonderful scent! Best wishes for a win in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2021 4:21:00 PM
Carolyn, thanks for the nice comment, I am longing for Spring too, it is getting cold here again _Constance

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