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SOUL  OF  THE  HOUSE

Poem from Anthology not winning trophy

No. 1286

Contest by Brian Strand

Palatial building of my Grandma, once in grandeur and pomp ran full of kith -kin -cousins on extended family. The staircase leading to roof with shiny banister on polished brass coating attracted all visitors. Any one ever met Grandma got charmed with her pleasing persona. The residence was my birthplace. So far, I remember on my visit, when I was four, Grandma put a flyer under porch of the house. Flyer was a dazzling golden satin cloth designed and stitched by herself with sparkling red spangles showing ‘Welcome Little Princess’ Onward whenever I visited, I saw that flyer in same gorgeous glow. She died when I was seventeen. And that was my last visit on her cremation. After sixty years I revisited the decaying house. Doors ,windows almost in broken condition: Rusted creaky latch in gate. Garden Once bloomed mostly in white fragrant flowers spreading pellucid placid calmness, now , no remnants left. It is full of feral ferns, wild weeds and thorny bushes. Most unexpected scenario : I was not shocked yet sighed. Whelmed to see the dusty bland flyer still hanging and showing ‘Welcome Little Princess’. Spangles embedded on pale flyer still in shimmering sheen. That four year old pretty princess now approaching eighty. Sun rays are making network of shadows through cracked lattice . The abandoned house greeted me through zephyr whispering ‘ Welcome home.’ I felt warmth of the soul of empty house. Tears rolled down my cheeks. I didn’t wipe off the flow but silently wept.

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Date: 6/6/2023 5:17:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Anisha :) - hugs
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Date: 6/6/2023 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Date: 6/3/2023 8:21:00 PM
"The abandoned house greeted me through zephyr whispering ‘ Welcome home.’ - a story (personal, I think) very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/3/2023 9:30:00 PM
Thanks for visit and appreciation.
Date: 6/3/2023 6:51:00 PM
Anisha, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/3/2023 9:30:00 PM
Thanks and Love.
Date: 5/29/2023 7:34:00 AM
- The soul of your grandmother lives on in this house ... a wonderful story, Anisha :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 6/3/2023 9:30:00 PM
Thanks and Love.

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