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Some Held Onto the Hiccup and Screech

All tidy and neat, smelling apple sweet Life pranced forward in an amazingly great way Then there was a hiccup, a screech, a slap Or something else that changed it into a foggy mean thing For a second but most did not hold a grudge, Reverting back to the happy joyful way it used to be Before the event Not all Some held onto the hiccup and screech Wailing and keening Tearing their eyes out of their faces To prove the horribleness of the slap To retain its power To stop living And it all happened Secretly in a subconscious world Where no one else could go No longer tidy or neat on Stanton Street.

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Date: 10/15/2020 9:52:00 PM
Such is life. We are all survivors of sort. Some strong, some weak. ~~
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/16/2020 1:09:00 AM
We surely are Victor. We surely are!
Date: 10/15/2020 2:57:00 PM
I imagine everybody has a hiccup, screech, and slap in their lives that changed everything. Such clever writing, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/15/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thank you John
Date: 10/15/2020 11:13:00 AM
wow, most profound. Can I say this has to do with current state of affairs?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/15/2020 2:58:00 PM
It sure does
Date: 10/15/2020 11:13:00 AM
and thanks for your words at my survivor poem, dear.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/15/2020 2:58:00 PM
You are always welcome Andrea
Date: 10/15/2020 6:55:00 AM
Brilliant!! A Fav for sure!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/15/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thank you Joe

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