Some Held Onto the Hiccup and Screech

All tidy and neat, smelling apple sweet
Life pranced forward in an amazingly great way
Then there was a hiccup, a screech, a slap 
Or something else that changed it into a foggy mean thing

For a second but most did not hold a grudge, 
Reverting back to the happy joyful way it used to be
Before the event 

Not all
Some held onto the hiccup and screech
Wailing and keening
Tearing their eyes out of their faces
To prove the horribleness of the slap 
To retain its power
To stop living

And it all happened
Secretly in a subconscious world
Where no one else could go
No longer tidy or neat on
Stanton Street.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/15/2020 9:52:00 PM
Such is life. We are all survivors of sort. Some strong, some weak. ~~
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/16/2020 1:09:00 AM
We surely are Victor. We surely are!
Date: 10/15/2020 2:57:00 PM
I imagine everybody has a hiccup, screech, and slap in their lives that changed everything. Such clever writing, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/15/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thank you John
Date: 10/15/2020 11:13:00 AM
wow, most profound. Can I say this has to do with current state of affairs?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/15/2020 2:58:00 PM
It sure does
Date: 10/15/2020 11:13:00 AM
and thanks for your words at my survivor poem, dear.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/15/2020 2:58:00 PM
You are always welcome Andrea
Date: 10/15/2020 6:55:00 AM
Brilliant!! A Fav for sure!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/15/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thank you Joe
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