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Short-lived Love

You think you’re the best
Your mind is at rest
You love with trust and zest 
Believing that deep down he feels the same.

But now I’m afraid
His love could abate
It looks like it's too late
Already in his dreams he calls her name.  



[I have to point out that this is not the usual tailed rhyme poem,
  it's my own personal layout.]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/5/2016 2:25:00 PM
I loved your personal layout of the tail-rhyme, Paul. Very truthful and sad affair w/some relationships. Excellent write and expressed superbly. Love your work as always, my friend.
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/5/2016 4:57:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Freddie. There is no place for doubt where true love exists, but blind love could spring a surprise!! Regards // paul
Date: 3/20/2014 12:20:00 AM
I enjoyed your take on tail rhyme!
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/20/2014 12:10:00 PM
Once again you visit with a nice comment :) Thank you Andrea. // paul
Date: 3/4/2014 6:12:00 PM
Very sad sentiment Paul, but lets hope this prediction is just a misperception. Maybe he's having a nightmare short lived. Smart way to rhyme afraid my friend. J.A.B.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/5/2014 5:07:00 AM
Your remarks are much appreciated. You're welcome to visit anytime. // paul
Date: 3/3/2014 12:50:00 PM
Many women are with the wrong guy who loves another but still keeps them on the hook. A sad tale as old as time. Well expressed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2014 3:03:00 PM
That is true.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/3/2014 3:01:00 PM
How right you are...though sometimes it happens the other way round too.
Date: 3/2/2014 4:57:00 PM
It's still a good write.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/3/2014 5:19:00 AM
Thank you Robert.
Date: 3/2/2014 10:28:00 AM
Intriguing write, Paul...The content...I wonder at the inspiration behind it. Thought provoking piece.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2014 11:18:00 AM
Hi Eileen happy to find you on line, as usual providing your welcome comments. The inspiration came from a cup of hot black coffee :) paul
Date: 3/2/2014 10:19:00 AM
like your layout - works for me )
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/2/2014 11:14:00 AM
Txs Jack for popping in. cu around