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Sex Drive or dead end street

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Dead End street Contest Sponsored by John Lawless 17/11/23

non traditional haiku

 

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pist'n broke male libido has vanished an anti climax

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/12/2024 3:32:00 PM
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I'm looking at the picture and poem and thinking the guy is making a proposition based on sex thought inertia--a guy thing even if we're incapable. The male brain is weird.
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2024 3:44:00 PM
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lol Duke, your comment made me smile! hugs jan xx
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/1/2023 2:06:00 AM
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This is hilarious, Jan. BOL in the contest. I'd be pist if my pist'n broke (lol) Hugs Charlie xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2024 3:43:00 PM
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thanks Charlie: -) sorry i missed replying before, think I must have got an n/a in the contest too lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Colbert
Date: 11/22/2023 9:51:00 AM
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Yet another great one. Old cars and men, do wear out. Rich
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2024 3:43:00 PM
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thanks Richard:-) sorry i missed replying before, hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 11/19/2023 5:27:00 AM
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They say sex after 40 is like shooting pool with a rope. lol
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2023 7:10:00 AM
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ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2023 9:26:00 AM
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That would be a need for an overhaul of body work!!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2023 2:47:00 AM
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i was in 2 minds about posting it Lin, so glad i did lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Bill Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 8:58:00 PM
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Well said, Jan. A good Haiku, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2023 2:06:00 AM
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Thanks Bill:-) hugs jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 11/17/2023 4:48:00 PM
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She's probably the reason he's pist n broke. LOL Very funny, Jan:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2023 2:05:00 AM
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Glad you 'got' the humour in this one DT lol I was in 2 minds about posting it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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David Fisher
Date: 11/17/2023 4:20:00 PM
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Jan, the title is worthy of the contest win by itself. Very clever. Nice Haiku, too!
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2023 2:05:00 AM
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Thanks for the comment David, I wasn't sure about posting this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 3:41:00 PM
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defintely the poor guy found himself in a dead end street....very creative. Best of luck with the contest, Sara
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2023 2:04:00 AM
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Thanks for your continued support Sara it is much appreciated xx:-) hugs jan xx
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 11/17/2023 3:12:00 PM
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Poor shrimpy doodle, he lost his poodle :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2023 2:04:00 AM
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lol Vie:-) hugs jan xx
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