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Sensual Abc-Contest

A blooming cluster drops essence Flowering gardens host images jubilant Kindling leisurely magical nemesis of peace Quenched robin's saliva tingling ultimate victory Waltzing xenias yodel zestfully September 25,, 2015 Contest:Sensual ABC Sponsor: Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/4/2015 12:28:00 AM

The analogy to the garden was very intriguing, Balveen. You have some very beautiful words in there....essence...blooming...quenched. It wasn't an easy for to write in. It took me so long to finally come up with mine. Thanks for visiting me. :)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/4/2015 12:48:00 AM

Sadly enough Eileen it was neither sensual nor erotic- more of romanticism-Which I thought could not be one of the norms on poetry. Wish I had been been corrected by an overview by someone. Anyway Eileen, it is heartening that despite going off roaad, you have still appreciated my journey. Love, Balveen

Michael Tor

Date: 9/25/2015 11:15:00 PM

Cleverly written. Lots of luck on the contest.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/26/2015 3:33:00 AM

Thanks for your good wishes and compliment, Michael!

Mark Woods

Date: 9/25/2015 7:37:00 PM

Lovely spin on the contest. Good luck in the contest

Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/26/2015 3:28:00 AM

Yeah, we're constantly spinning words, aren't we? Thanks for your good wishes, Mark!