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Selfish Shellfish

Why do shellfish Seem so selfish Is it they dwell Inside their shell And don’t admit But only spit That old salt brine After they dine Day in and out In their hideout Yet near the rocks Creation knocks On their hard wall But through it all They stay inside To safely hide From us their foe; How could they know? When we dig clams Their two doors slam Same with mussel That we rustle Can't un-cloister Hermit oyster Or peel the husk From the mollusk They’re much too vain In their domain Or just abhor The open door Though we still crave Them ‘neath the wave And will not cease ‘Til they release A cherished dish; Sorry, shellfish

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Date: 8/15/2023 7:12:00 PM
Another fun write from your busy mind David. So creative and fun to read! :)
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Date: 7/19/2023 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations my friend! I am back.It’s so obvious you are a true writer, not a funster! And though your poems may seem like simple rhyme….they sparkle with thought first and humor, secondarily. I find this uniquely original. And envy the paths your mind travels in and I love it. ***** PR
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Date: 7/17/2023 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed you fun write. Have a wonderful day..........
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Date: 7/15/2023 8:47:00 PM
That's giving it to them, David! Ha, ha! A great write. Thoroughly enjoyed, gw
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Date: 7/14/2023 4:35:00 PM
such a cute creative idea. Well done, David.
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Date: 7/13/2023 8:25:00 AM
A fun and unhindered read ! + Biology-life lessoning vantage points rolled into subtle disguised as incidental (the most brilliant way in my opinion to convey truth). I found this to be akin to a poetry-kernel-blueprint [shell] . ; As its home and delivery vehicle ! Just like the shelfish has ! I really like this style. (Extremely creative and symbiotic to itself; flows like a wave upon wave structure.) The amount of information and experience in such few words, a delicate fluid eco-system !
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Date: 7/13/2023 2:35:00 AM
Why do I suddenly feel the urge to go to the bar after reading this one... "Clam Bar" that is...fun one. I think I'll make my famous clams casino tonight. Thanks for this!
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Date: 7/12/2023 7:11:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, David! I like the short lines and rhyme in this amusing write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/12/2023 3:40:00 PM
Gads, you are so wonderfully creative David. Talk about freaking outside of the box… That you. Greatly appreciated.. Pangie
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Date: 7/12/2023 1:08:00 PM
LOL. Perhaps they are introverts are just a little too smart. Enjoyed this poem David. You made a very tasty point.
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Date: 7/12/2023 9:47:00 AM
Catchy Title. Explore sea food. Have Good Days
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Date: 7/12/2023 8:57:00 AM
You know your seafood, David. Good rhyming and a fun read, my friend. Bill
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