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Seduce me in Black and White You reach toward my face and touch my lips Tracing the slightly raised pink curve of them gently - lightly - before the urge to kiss me seizes the opportunity Surrealistic sensations immortalize as our lips seek and lock Interchange of strange, new emotions flow as our tongues entwine Sun having a siesta under his canopy of clouds sends sombre golden light slanting through the old colonial blinds Enough for me to see ~ I want to see ~ Caressing fingers don’t stop as kisses linger moving in seductive circular motion Circling - tracing - moulding twin peaks to unashamed pertness Tantalising ripples course my body Like the soft waving flutter of butterflies winged kisses creating sensuous ripple upon ripple Of pure undulating pulsating I want to see ~ Fingers urgently move now to my navel circling, tracing, tinkling Like a pianist on his keys of black and white Are they really only two colours? Why then do they lilt a rainbow of colours to my ears? On my fevered skin caressing fingers script my Rhapsody The slow whirring beat of the ancient ceiling fan picks up a harmonic note of a solitary flute Wanting to add to the sultry scene It lends its own mysterious charm A tantalising urge to arch I want to feel ~ Impatient now for them to move further Fiery Desire entices curious fingers to touch dew that cumulates dusk to dawn on my awakening rose Exciting, enticing emotions The aromatic rapture floats me to you a tortuously slow feeling to satiate Propels bodies to engage I want to feel ~ I want to feel ~ I want to feel you A frog croaks discordantly outdoors Snapping me out of my reverie Startling me out of my romantic fantasy Eyes fall back on monochrome words of my book I long to dwell in this erotic moment Weaving the music into a mesmerising crescendo However The old wooden blades of the ceiling fan resume back to the rhythmic measured clickity clack The spell now broken I reach for my phone to call my lover He awaits my call …
Video Clip - Yanni - Romantic piano

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Date: 10/29/2018 4:32:00 PM
So enjoyed the trace as my heart quickened as the rose came into full bloom, then snap back into reality - Love it :)
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Date: 4/16/2018 2:39:00 AM
This is a really sensual write, a poem full of lovely lines, it s amazing that sometime the writer writes things so amazingly that we experience ourselves playing the role and doing all these things, yet again something always break the spell, and sometimes even the purpose isn t completed, during my studies, it often happens to me and then all of a sudden in my imaginations I could heard my father s voice, telling me to study, anyway really enjoyed reading this beautiful poe of yours
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Date: 4/10/2018 3:20:00 PM
Your sensual phrasing and musical allusions make me think of the romantic and voluptuous compositions of Wagner. You are truly the queen of erotic verse, Maria.
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Maria Williams
Date: 4/11/2018 3:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Geoffrey, so nice to see you. Thanks for the visit and lovely comments always.....Maria
Date: 4/9/2018 9:53:00 AM
Such passionate,sensual and seductive verses my friend. Hot , hot and hot comes mind and past images in the reader's life blast forth! Now that is intense and truly brilliant and classically erotic poetry.. A fav...
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Maria Williams
Date: 4/9/2018 11:16:00 PM
So sweet of you to say so Robert. Its nice to relive the past, some great memories to dwell on. I love the beautiful comments you leave, I am humbled and deeply grateful. Thanks so much for the support my dear friend....Maria :)
Date: 3/13/2018 8:48:00 AM
I'll seduce you regardless of color or lack of it... will be checking on the airlines schedule momentarily!!! I'll be the sexy old guy with a flowing white beard!!! HUH??? XOX Happy Jackles! (SMOULDERING!)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/15/2018 5:44:00 AM
Shouldn't do this to an old fellow like me... it's life-threatening!!! LOL WOWSERS!!! XOX
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/14/2018 9:09:00 AM
I'm heading over sweet Maria!!! XOX
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/14/2018 7:26:00 AM
If this sent you smouldering Jack, perhaps you may want to check out my subsequent poem 'Passion in Black White' - Now don't blame me Lol ...Maria xox
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/13/2018 11:40:00 PM
All for a book of Black and White Seduction that I'm contemplating. Will have to give it some more thought though. I've got a lot on my plate already. So lovely to see you Jack, and thank you always for the smile you put on my face. You are a shining light you know, flowing white beard and all, always spreading good cheer, thank you....Maria xox
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/13/2018 11:15:00 AM
Phew! Now that I've had a chance to settle down! Phew! Maria! That sure stirred up my stir stick! Smoldering sensuality as Freddie put it! PHEW AGAIN! Love, Happy Jack xox
Date: 3/12/2018 10:34:00 AM
The High Handmaiden of Love Poetry pen strikes again! You got the knack, Maria ... that's a fact. Smoldering sensuality lights the fire of this body spark dance of romance. Just super fun reading this erotica let-loose emotional ascension. Brilliant poetry as usual per your gold standards. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 3/13/2018 11:43:00 PM
Oh my oh my, keep the praise coming, I love it. Thank you Freddy for the most illustrious comments I've have ever received on PS from any poet. Can I fave all your comments? I really appreciate your support you know....Maria :)
Date: 3/12/2018 4:37:00 AM
Hello Maria You are a camera who captures the live film of love in the pictures of your beautiful words.........Only a camera can do this ....so you did it very well.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/15/2018 10:26:00 AM
yes sure i will
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/12/2018 8:07:00 AM
I blush Muhammad with your compliment. Thank you for it and for visiting my page. I trust you will like the sequel in the poem following - 'Passion in Black and White'...Maria
Date: 2/28/2018 4:05:00 AM
I have fallen of my chair due to sweet imaginations, hey! Maria
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/12/2018 4:37:00 AM
well said solomon....
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Date: 2/28/2018 7:52:00 PM
Oh no, I hope you didn't hurt yourself? Thanks Solomon for your sweet comment and visit....Maria
Date: 2/27/2018 3:00:00 AM
This is a sensual description of a great feeling and desire...of love black and white.
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Date: 2/28/2018 7:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Honesty , I appreciate your comments and visit....Maria
Date: 2/26/2018 4:06:00 PM
where does one start Maria, your comments say it all, and so right they are too. the poetry is amazing, commanded a second read, after all my football team here in the uk, wear black and white, so that was a good start and then it just got better, another aspect the subject matter covers a very wide age range, i for one at the top of it. but after reading this, i was transformed back,,thanks for that i needed it..love your poetry, its so real, i guess so you, if i may be a little presumptuous.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/28/2018 7:48:00 PM
Not presumptuous at all Harry, thank you for the compliment. Transformation is good, at any time. So glad that you liked this Harry, thanks always for your sincere comments....Maria
Date: 2/25/2018 4:43:00 PM
oo la la. Magnifico. LOL, I see I am not the only oo la la here....x
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:57:00 PM
Haha, yes, a flavoursome expression that. Thanks Leanne, both for the visit and support always....Maria xxx
Date: 2/25/2018 7:32:00 AM
Excellent. Very well done. Very romantic and seductive write. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thanks Ravi, so glad that you liked it. Thanks always for the support and lovely comments....Maria
Date: 2/24/2018 8:44:00 PM
A sultry spell 'awakening the rose'...A beautiful sensual write Maria..
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Date: 2/24/2018 9:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph. I loved your explanation of this poem, as it were, in one monoku line.Keep writing your great poems...Maria
Date: 2/24/2018 4:53:00 AM
Good goobity-woobity. This is so sensual. I love the way you play with words.
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Date: 2/24/2018 9:20:00 PM
Thanks Richard for your summation. Indeed, you couldn't have chosen a better first three words in your comment - It's exactly the feeling...Maria
Date: 2/24/2018 3:11:00 AM
What a wonderful fantasy. A visceral array of emotion and desire described superbly with the use of intense imagery and the fan being used to great effect in describing the before and after when the world crowds back into your senses. Must have been a heck of a book Maria.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/24/2018 9:31:00 PM
Indeed James - perhaps I should find another book like it! Thank you for visiting - Your excellent synopsis describing the different phases is very apt...Maria
Date: 2/23/2018 1:29:00 PM
What an amazing poem that your pen has written! The theme though has surprised me but on the other hand you are a wonderful poet capable of writing on all subjects masterfully dear, Maria!
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Date: 2/24/2018 12:17:00 AM
Thank you my dearest friend Demetrios. Your words of high praise mean a lot to me. You have been my greatest supporter, and I am hugely grateful for that, thank you ....Maria xxx
Date: 2/22/2018 8:54:00 PM
Whew! Hot stuff!! I certainly enjoy your sensuous story-telling dear Maria. A very seductive and passionate write that had me hanging on every word.. until that damned frog croaked.. lol! Love the twist at the end that broke the magical sexual tension of your poem for a perfect finish. Your impassioned imagery and emotion is stunning. Warmest wishes and hugs my friend. ~Susan
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Date: 2/23/2018 4:55:00 AM
As I do yours and your effervescent and sincere comments my friend. I think i'm going to have to catch that pesky frog and leave him at the park down the road. Hopefully he'll find himself a 'ribbet' love. Lol. Thanks Susan for your visit I really appreciate your support....Maria xxx
Date: 2/22/2018 7:21:00 PM
Some great comments Maria.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 4:58:00 AM
I'm over the moon Richard, will have to do something about that frog though. Thank you for the lovely comments always....Maria :)
Date: 2/22/2018 2:36:00 PM
Each line created an ascending level of temptation & want. Tremendous. I feel the most important aspect of this was the reflection of it all in the end. That reflection creating a visceral need to feel it all over again.
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/23/2018 5:00:00 AM
The 'visceral need', yes I like that. Drake thank you for the great comment and visit, I am most appreciative....Maria :)
Date: 2/22/2018 9:40:00 AM
Nicely done, Maria, very romantic and seductive.. dream :)
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Date: 2/23/2018 5:01:00 AM
Thanks Eve, so glad that you liked it. Thank you for the lovely comments and support always....Maria xxx
Date: 2/21/2018 3:30:00 PM
My goodness, yes, hot hot hot!!! And the title is even more fitting when we get to the ending! Such splendid imagery you showed us with this erotic poem.
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Date: 2/21/2018 10:52:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, I wanted to try something different with a "shock' factor thrown in. Looks like I succeeded . Thanks for the visit, I really appreciate them and your lovely comments always....Maria xxx
Date: 2/21/2018 9:07:00 AM
ooh la la, this is beyond hot. My imagination followed every curve.
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Date: 2/21/2018 10:55:00 PM
Good to see that you liked this Richard.Thank you for the visit and comment. I really do appreciate your lovely comments and support....Maria :)
Date: 2/21/2018 8:31:00 AM
Sensual, erotic and passionate, more so because fantasy could at times raise things to a higher level, in a different sort of way. This compares very well with other poems of yours written on a similar theme (She, Sensual Nature...). The topic has been treated and presented with a capable dignified pen. Now, let me go have a word with that frog...:) ~ Regards // paul
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/21/2018 11:01:00 PM
Yes, how perspicacious of you Paul, so right, sometimes I draw a line from my other poems,in this case being from 'She' and 'Summer Wine'. And you are so right I wanted to present it in a classy way, but couldn't resist the surprise factor for laughs. So glad that you liked it my dear friend, thank you always for the support and sincere comments....Maria :)
Date: 2/21/2018 5:31:00 AM
I want to feel...great poem...It got me back into the love mood... I want to feel ...Nice one
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Date: 2/21/2018 5:39:00 AM
Well Arturo, see my comment to Carole below. Don't wait, seize the moment...Carpe Diem. Thanks for the visit...Maria
Date: 2/21/2018 2:32:00 AM
Wow!!! You get an A++ in sensual poetry ,Maria!! Now I need a cigarette!! Lol Beautifully done. No joke...a wonderful fantasy. Makes me want to call somebody...lol
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Maria Williams
Date: 2/21/2018 5:36:00 AM
I'm all for that...call somebody ..tell them to bring some cigarettes over you've run out, oh, and a bottle of wine wouldn't go astray Lol Thanks Carole my dear friend for all the support and sincere comments always....Maria xxx
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