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These scars on my soul are beautiful and painful, deep gashes that cannot be seen except in my eyes; the sorrow I keep within me is dreadful, my short life has been full of death and whys. Deep gashes that cannot be seen except in my eyes, I thought the passage of time would heal the scars; my short life has been full of death and whys, at night all my beloved are the sparkling stars. I thought the passage of time would heal the scars, I take two white roses to the tomb of my babies; at night my beloved are the sparkling stars, my forever grief is full of long past sweet reveries. I take two white roses to the tomb of my babies, weeping I touch all the names engraved in stone; my forever grief is full of long past reveries, within my soul the forever sorrow still moans. Weeping I touch all the names engraved in stone, yet from this pain something beautiful was to be; within my soul the forever sorrows still moan, and I write from a scarred soul my sad poetry. Yet from this pain something beautiful was to be, the sorrow I keep within me is dreadful; and I write from a scarred soul my poetry, these scars on my soul are beautiful and painful. _________________________ December 12, 2015 (Repost) Poetry/Pantoum/''Scars"(originally Beautiful Scars) Copyright Protected ID 12-1122-511-12 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the Premier contest, Your Best Poem, 2020 sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke First Place ________________________ Originally posted with the title of Beautiful Scars Submitted to the contest, Favorite Rhyming Poem Ever, Lu Loo, First Place Submitted to the contest, Your Personal Favorite Poem, Ironik, Third Place Submitted to the contest, Your Absolute Best, The Seeker, Fourth Place Submitted to the contest, A Poem You Are Proud OF, Skat, Fourth Place Submitted to the contest, Favorite, sponsor, Casarah Nance, First Place Submitted to the contest, Best Old Poem, sponsor, Judy Konos, First Place Featured poem on Arthur Vaso's poetry site, 2016 Put to music, 2015, by Silent One Poem Of The Day, December 17, 2015

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Date: 9/26/2021 10:12:00 AM
Oh my, what a deep, sad emotional write my friend...submitted for so many contests...am sure this is a poem you are proud of... am happy to see that this was featured and was also put to music... GREAT write Dear Heart... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Constance La France
Date: 9/26/2021 5:16:00 PM
Ani, thank for visiting Scars (not sure why I changed the name of the poem), I have done very well with this poem, it makes me very proud ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 4/18/2021 6:00:00 AM
This is so deep. There are scars in our lives that we can never get rid of. I lost my little sister when she was just seven month old. I was young but she happens to be the only biological sister I ever had. The only memory of her that I remained with is how I used to play by her side whenever mum put her down, how I told my friends about our little princess. And the tragic one is how I played by her death bed as lay there lifeless. Great poem Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/18/2021 7:41:00 AM
Phred, thank you for visiting "Beautiful Scars" and for the wonderful comment, so sorry about your little sister, I know the pain that lingers forever, and thanks for the compliment, as you can see, I have done very well with this poem since it was written, love _Constance
Date: 6/13/2020 5:53:00 PM
I am so glad I got to read some old gems from your pen because of this contest. I find most of your poems the best because of the emotions that feel real but this one is beautiful in darkness too. God bless you Constance. Congratulations on your top placement. It is always a pleasure to see your name shining in the lists. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2020 4:27:00 PM
Aditi, thanks for visiting and the congratulations, this was a tough one to to write, I just poured my love out _Constance
Date: 6/13/2020 6:04:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this ... indeed beautiful so truthfully and creatively carved from your heart. It's my prayer that the Lord will beautify your life all the more ... by His grace. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2020 4:28:00 PM
Beata, thanks for the congrats and the nice comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 6/12/2020 8:45:00 PM
darkly beautiful Constance...this is truly special indeed :)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2020 4:29:00 PM
David, thank you for visiting and for the compliment on my poem _Constance
Date: 6/12/2020 6:04:00 PM
Who could not be moved deeply by these deep waters of emotion and poetry? Simply wonderful in your pantoum expression of sad memories and thoughts of what might have been. A big congrats for your #1 win... enjoy the honor. Hugs ~ John
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Constance La France
Date: 6/17/2020 4:29:00 PM
Joh, thanks so much for the nice comment and the compliment and the congrats, appreciate _Constance
Date: 6/12/2020 3:30:00 PM
Congrats on your top honors, Constance. It would be a spectacular poem to hear read out loud. Best wishes ~
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Date: 6/17/2020 4:31:00 PM
Line, thanks for the congrats and it is wonderful read aloud, I will ask if I can share that to the person who did it for me, you will need kleenex for sure _Constance
Date: 6/12/2020 12:30:00 PM
Hi friends, the original poem was posted under the title Beautiful Scars but is the same poem used in all the above mentioned. For some reason along the way I had to repost it, probably for one of the many contests it has been entered into, oh yes, I recall now it was a Team Poetry Soup audio contest , which it did not place in because the audio was messed up (and so I did not even list that contest) _Constance
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