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Rock ... Rock ... The dry leaves crackle under our blanket One of only two sounds that find me The other is her Rock ... Rock ... Pure and lovely Wanted and wanting She is all Rock ... Rock ... Skin against skin Joy upon joy We find heaven for a time Rock ... Rock ... There is no pain and we suffer not There is only Us Us and the autumn leaves Rock ... Rock ... I can not tell her sweat from mine Everything is as one As our bodies Rock ... Rock ... I hear my name on her lips It sounds natural It feels right Rock ... Rock ... Her hair dances across my face It smells of strawberries Strawberries and Us Rock ... Rock ... I feel it and her body tenses and trembles I see the passion being excised I see the pleasure become too much Rock ... Rock ... It rolls over me and I lose control For a moment I feel one with the entire world I hear her playful laugh Her shy laugh Her dirty little girl laugh Rock ... I fall to the blanket The crunching leaves greet me With dry and welcome applause I love her I love her I think that she loves me, too

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Date: 12/23/2009 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Bradley. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:56:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Bradley! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:15:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 12/10/2009 7:17:00 PM
Thanks everybody!
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Date: 12/9/2009 11:59:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
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Date: 12/8/2009 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Bradley. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:50:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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Date: 5/6/2009 9:57:00 AM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 5/4/2009 12:38:00 PM
just a wonderful journey into love, passion and play..Light & love
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