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Remembering the Phant

There's more than just size to the elephant, they do do some things that the others can't. Many stories show these acts as valiant; in the wild, grand gestures seem elegant. Their wisdom is "ear-ily" evident, nothing too pithy or given to rant - like wry witticisms from Oscar Levant. Or, Ogden Nash whose stanzas are extant, not the rhymes of some silly sycophant. Pachyderms make empathy "rel-e-phant"!

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Date: 1/17/2022 2:39:00 PM
A cute and clever write, Greg! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/17/2022 2:41:00 PM
Like the Phant Kim, I shall remember your kindness and support. Thank you.
Date: 1/16/2022 11:45:00 PM
A fun read and not easy to do for some of us so congrats. A keeper.
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Date: 1/17/2022 10:55:00 AM
Craig, certainly one way to look at it. The other is a bunch of forced rhymes all stacked up. Whatever? I chose to take your kind comments to heart. Thank you.
Date: 1/16/2022 1:46:00 PM
I have read your winner and was delighted it was on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/17/2022 10:57:00 AM
Your support and visits are most appreciated.
Date: 1/16/2022 6:52:00 AM
A beautiful Monorhyme with phant concept. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/16/2022 9:19:00 AM
The Phant always remembers a kindness. Thank you.
Date: 4/26/2021 7:41:00 PM
I did not know what you meant by "phant" when I first started reading. However, everything became crystal clear as I continued. You have a clever write here.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/27/2021 5:11:00 AM
Thanks for your visit Robert. It's always a pleasure.
Date: 4/25/2021 10:39:00 AM
Soooo witty and very clever this "phant," Greg! Love your slant - not a rant - definitely elegant! Levant and Nash would be proud. Great rhyme scheme and use of words. Congrats for this entrant! All the best!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/17/2022 11:01:00 AM
So good that you got that last "entrant" rhyme/pun in at the end of your comment. Too much fun!

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