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Day stacks upon day, forming opaque windows behind me. These can be blown away at times, a clarity of vision in momentary glimpses. Here, a face most beloved, turning my bowels to water that reflects pain. There, a scent, sensed so briefly, like a camera flash leaving red dots in my vision. Floods of sensation follow, barely tolerated. Not all are plague days, but pain is recalled far more clearly than pleasure. This savings account of experience makes one rich with character and compassion. Cutting in the details of my sculpture, creating a face with my name. Here, the vertical line between brows, carved by the loss of love. There, the deep dimple in my cheek, where love was found again. Sometimes the brush strokes, the etchings, are strong enough to reach inside with hands of despair, the scalpel that sheds heart's blood or drills deep into bone and brain. That is where your memory lives, my son. No, not anymore in my womb, nor my arms. We cannot know the heights of joy and bliss without the depths of blue sorrow. To allow memory place is in my power to deny. A truth I had to learn. And in the knowing, I am set at liberty, for what can they possibly do to me now? I've paid my dues and fees for sunny weather. The Forcast is bursting with light, packed with windy autumn days, smelling of pumpkin spice, with cozy winter nights and the scent of wood smoke, with the crisp green of growing things and ripe swell of new life. The magic eight ball floats me a perdition… ”outlook good”.

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Date: 4/17/2025 12:30:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations, dear poetess, on your top win in this poetry contest with a wonderful poem with deep metaphors, which one has to read between the lines. Wish that the light o blessings ever brighten your life.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/17/2025 6:15:00 AM
Thank you for that! Blessings to you too! Xo
Date: 4/15/2025 9:22:00 AM
This is a masterpiece really worthy of the top win. Congrats.
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Date: 4/17/2025 6:15:00 AM
Thank you so much! Xo
Date: 4/15/2025 5:45:00 AM
Well look at you placing at the top of Daniel's first contest. Awesome reflection on loss and the good things in the present as well as the rosy forecast. We were thru W.VA yesterday. Cabin Creek road, Paint Creek road, rte 19 etc. avoiding the nasty tolls lol
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/15/2025 4:16:00 PM
Oh my goodness! You were only a few miles from our house! :( we'd have loved to make yall dinner and meet you!
Date: 4/14/2025 11:47:00 AM
Crystol, I couldn't help but notice the corners of my lips continue to raise as I read through your poem again and again. You brought a smile to my face, the kind of which opens the gates of the human experience. From poet to poet, I felt beaty, awe, and fulfilment in reading this work of art. Your words inspire me to continue to write. Thank you. To me, poetry is a means of connection to a hopeful end of growth, enlightenment and action. You have achieved that - God Bless
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/14/2025 2:35:00 PM
Well what a beautiful comment and response to my poem! :)... you've made my day along with Daniel! Tysm for taking the time to read and comment... blessings xoxo
Date: 4/14/2025 10:12:00 AM
Dear Crystol, Congrats on winning 1st place in my contest. After reading this many times I thought about how it cut bone-deep, a chisel shaping raw truth. That "savings account of experience"? You’ve turned pain into gold, sculpted a face of survival even grief can’t weather. Here’s to your "Forecast of light" First place! You’ve earned more: a lifetime of autumn winds, woodsmoke nights, and the liberty of knowing. Proud doesn’t cover it. Celebrate hard. Spring Blessings, My Dear Crystol, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/14/2025 2:24:00 PM
Wooooow!!!! :):):) I'm sooo happy and excited and honored! I've had quite the dry spell lately with contests but I try to remember not everyone has the same taste in poetry and that there are so many superior poets here on ps, you among them! You greatly honor me Daniel. I am so very proud and plan to post this on my fb page for friends and family! This was an excellent contest and I can't wait to read all the entries! With such a grateful heart, C xoxo
Date: 3/24/2025 3:47:00 PM
Very deep poem. It's ashamed you had such a loss, but it's good that you can express what goes on inside and see a forecast bursting with light!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/25/2025 9:07:00 AM
Thank you David, it is true that without knowing that dead end of despair, we couldn't comprehend the joy at the other end of the scale. Xoxo
Date: 3/23/2025 12:43:00 PM
Holy smokes this is a powerhouse poem full if vivid imagery and intense emotions, and very impressionable lines. "Not all are plague days, but pain is recalled far more clearly than pleasure" is just one of the beautiful and relatable lines. Well done, definitely a favorite for me, can't wait to read more <3
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/23/2025 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so much BJ! I love to hear that someone can relate to my writing... it gives me so much encouragement! Xo
Date: 3/21/2025 10:47:00 AM
such a powerful piece I cant imagine the pain of losing a child Crystol i know someone who had a still birth and it affected her mentally so badly but somehow life has to go on and I like the uplifting ending to the poem :-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/21/2025 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Jan for the connection with my poem. This is what poetry is about for me... connecting with others who can commiserate, bringing a unity of souls. Xoxo
Date: 3/21/2025 10:09:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed weekend writing away............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/21/2025 10:23:00 AM
Bless your heart Paula! You always bring cheer...xoxo

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