Rattle the Chain


Ta'likra
was a most stubborn slave
He loved to rattle the chain
It was a sound of pure defiance
that echoed across the lush plantation terrain

Son of Antuk
had a pygmy burning bush spirit
He seethed silently
as the lashes dug deep into his back
The masters hoped the other slaves
would see this bloody spectacle and fear it,
thwarting any thoughts of a rebellious attack

He was beloved by the other slaves,
he had a will of burnished steel
He had a big heart, noble and brave,
his presence strengthened the weak and the ill

The European rulers had a troublesome dilemma:
If they killed Ta'likra, they would make him a martyr;
causing him to live still past his death, 
stirring up angry African chants of unrest
And if they let him live,
he would continue to challenge their authority
Thus making it harder to rule over
the other slaves with complete fear and impunity

They struck a balance as to what they would do,
they would whip him daily, give him meager rations
Eventually break his spirit down to ashes
But that didn't work against this
four-foot-two mountain of a man

He was Pygmy,
he was a dark bush man
He was pure African,
borne upon the hot desert sand
He didn't fear death,
he didn't fear pain
Thrice bitten by the deadly viper,
he loved to rattle the chain

The masters, unable to break his spirit,
were perplexed and at wits end
When a wizened one with gnarled raised hand,
offered up a most enlightened plan
This old, white medicine man
appealed to Ta'likra in a peach grove
He said, where would the souls of the ancestors go,
if the tree of life isn't allowed to flourish and grow
The tender buds of the future will wither away,
and the great roots of your ancestors will die here today
Let us gather up the ancient leaves, my warrior friend,
and build a fire of peace
Let us pay homage to the holy ancient ones
with gifts of love and largesse
For as the stars will not always remain in the sky to stay,
the chains of slavery will be removed from your people one day

Ta'likra, the Pygmy prince,
peered into the blue eyes of the old man,
and thought deep on his sage sayings
Then he arose in dignified grace
and silently walked away
He never once rattled his chain again,
he kept his untamed rage locked in the cage within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/16/2016 4:09:00 PM
excellant narrative freddie been watching a series on bbc2 http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/p00b8dvf eye opening learn something new everyday they say stephen
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Date: 11/8/2016 7:19:00 PM
Love that name Antuk! What a great story RW.
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Date: 11/8/2016 5:32:00 PM
Hi Freddie, You have penned such a well written narrative. I was reminded of the "Roots" many series by Alex Haley. Well done. A without a doubt seven and fav:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/8/2016 2:26:00 PM
A most inspired and touching narrative poem, Freddie. The words and wisdom of an elder are worth listening to. ~ Regards // paul
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/8/2016 3:22:00 PM
Ty, Paul. The older I get, the more I appreciate that POV more. Ha ha ha. Appreciate the kind words, friend.
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