Rage

Riding a scotch high
down
a twisting
river road past
midnight,
his grip tightens
on the steering wheel
in sync 
with the pressure of his foot
on the accelerator.
He convinces himself
he is chasing
meaning
in a meaningless time,
waiting perhaps 
around the next curve
or the next
in the tree with his name on it.

Silence shatters
in the mirror
above the dashboard:
the familiar face glares at him,
screams 
the ugly sound of rage.
He trembles,
sees himself in the agony
of his limits.
He listens to what he sees;
he hears madness.
He breaks the glass,
disappears in the cry.

In the headlights,
purple eyes
devour the mist.
Gods of another age,
another plane,
guide him,
automatic cruise,
into the empty night
beyond 
the threat of the winding river.



© Gene Williamson, 2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 23, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Another reading of this poem and I'm still impressed. The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in a powerful way. Thank you for kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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October 4, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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September 27, 2009 at 1:31 PM
Much for the reader to ponder in this poem. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Gene. Love, Carol
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August 29, 2009 at 8:48 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Gene! Adeleke
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August 28, 2009 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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August 24, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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August 24, 2009 at 8:10 AM
congratulations - a chilling window into addiciton and anger....very well done. IN my favorites!
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August 24, 2009 at 3:37 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Gene. Love, Carol
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August 24, 2009 at 2:05 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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April 4, 2009 at 6:11 PM
The following lines: "riding a scotch high down a twisting river road," "the ugly sound of rage," "disappears in the cry," and "into the empty night beyond the threat of the winding river" are to my reading highlighted strokes of this pieces beauty. It's structurally symmetrical as well (either by design or not), and the cuastic, single-visioned pursuit of the narrator is breackneck and terrifying. Well done.
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April 3, 2009 at 1:05 PM
This was frightening, Gene, but I'm glad "Gods of another age" carried him safely home. You have a great story here; it grips the reader's attention from the first line. Awesome poetry!
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