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Pushing Fingers---Erotica Contest

I sit next to her
Dreaming my boyhood fantasies
The side of my hand touches her thigh
Wishing I could reach between her legs
Push my fingers into her softness
Feel the dampness of her need 
Hear that wanting sigh
Her calling out
"ohhhhh, you're my guy
push deeper
I want to fly"

I look down her top
see the delicate curve of her breast
imagine what it would be like
to see her undressed
Within my minds eye
every part of her caressed

Me her master
In control
Her desiring me to fill each hole
together intertwined on the floor we role
I dive deep
like a submarine
As I push forward she grinds and leans
Me taking her places she's never been

From my mouth a gurgled sigh
Wetness creates a dark stain near my fly
She turns towards me 
my throat goes dry

I silently pray 
"please don't look at my pants."
If she sees it 
I won't have a chance 
She smiles a knowing smile and says
"Don't worry young man, 
it's time for him to come out and play!"




Charlotte's Scorchers Contest
Written November 18th, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/22/2013 10:55:00 AM
If I were straight, I would ask if it was hot in here or just me? Nonetheless, superbly described and executed. I may not relate to it sexually, but I can sure appreciate the skillful way you expressed this piece. Kudos, my friend :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/22/2013 5:23:00 PM
Ha, ha. It all depends on how you visualize. Thanks for the comment you made me smile.
Date: 11/21/2013 8:52:00 PM
I don't about pushing fingers Rick, I think you pushed this right to edge, made me smile:):), Very brave write. Good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/22/2013 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Richard. ;0)
Date: 11/20/2013 6:32:00 PM
very sensual Rick gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/22/2013 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 11/19/2013 9:25:00 PM
Wow Rick, I think the title should be called magic fingers....you definitely have a way with words and touch ; ) ....sultry write! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/20/2013 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Cecillia. You made me smile.
Date: 11/19/2013 10:38:00 AM
This is.......very erotic. Hmmmmmm....I love the first bit...I was hoping for a different ending, but I guess you are keeping that for part II?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2013 10:40:00 AM
Ha ha, we will see.
Date: 11/19/2013 9:47:00 AM
Holy damn, look at you, Richard! =D I used to be so shy about that stuff when I was a kid. This had me laughing good. Excellent!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2013 10:41:00 AM
I was a bit shy myself but have gotten over it. *lol*
Date: 11/18/2013 8:32:00 PM
Oh damn. Hot! Bet it turns even more sizzling once he plays ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2013 10:42:00 AM
Ha ha, you are right!