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Praeteritum

Does time past germinate in lost stories its tendrils stir and drill through tender soil, and breaks the cold clay of deep memories but reseeds us by impossible toil. It's Ixion strapped to the poetic wheel spinning our tales eternally around but never can words our fates truly seal until inspiration’s loud thunders sound.

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Date: 5/24/2019 1:38:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 5/23/2019 9:21:00 AM
Classy write Brian your use of the lexicon is top notch. This is worthy of the win, a belated congrats to you!
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Date: 5/22/2019 8:43:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Brian. Well done.
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Date: 5/22/2019 10:47:00 AM
Congrats, Brian! Always the wheel’s turning. We hold so much inside and only as raw material that occasionally gets used or combined in a myriad of ways!
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Brian Duffield
Date: 5/22/2019 11:05:00 AM
Appreciate your comments.. really good trying to capture such abstract ideas in a brevity
Date: 5/22/2019 10:36:00 AM
Exquisite piece Brian! Congratulations for your top win! xomo
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Brian Duffield
Date: 5/22/2019 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Enjoyed this challenge

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