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precious … days consumed … before they even take a breath or wink to waking … oh the wealth of life so squandered for white-hot agony behind the eye - hours stretched to inestimable eternity in nauseated darkness unavoidably focused on all that’s not being accomplished - all thats left withering in the sun and all those who resent this beast that robs you both of precious time (or you, undeservedly) … do I not wholly believe in empirical purpose? do I not relinquish all to its tenets?? yes - in everything, I do … and yet … the intendment in THIS neurological monstrosity - this searing saboteur and all its chronic collateral casualty is something I shall never … ever … comprehend.

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