Possessing a Huntress' Grit

In nightshade she rages in fumes
And  drives me to the edge  of  unrest
Inside coal eyes, my breath exhumed
Granting her to stew, I feel pressed.

Dark tresses of fire keeps burning
A passion that ignites a whirl...
This vixen’s scold reeks like a sting
But truth of her  words were sincere.

Enticed,  I drink the spiced potion
That bathes deep down inside of me;
Possessing a huntress’ grit, she drones
As my pride she melts, heavenly.

My woman is both river and sleet
Her quarter moon flushed with grace;
Eclipsing my will, my defeat
To accept a female's bold ways!



Dr. Ram Mehta's Husbands Are In Heaven.. Contest
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Oyewole Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Nicely done! Congrats on your win in the contest, Nette!!
Harper Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 6:40 PM
lol, she is one spicy dame, I can believe its heaven, congratulations on your win Nette
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Brilliantly expressed Nette. Congrats on your well deserved win - Connie
Lamoureux Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 8:52 AM
So nice to see this one on the top of the winners list. Congrats.
Kayode Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 4:33 AM
Congrats on the win Nette . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 3:43 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, nette
Lamoureux Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Very powerful lines, a most unique interpretation of the contest. I like it very much.
Watson Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Not a husband yet but I'm in heaven reading this . Lovely poem nette. Daz
Manassian Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 9:39 AM
OH....I Love the power and spirit of this one, Nette! On the prowl, are we??? ;) Hope you catch your prey...You've caught us with the charm of these words...Hugs
Hamilton Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 6:01 AM
a wealth of feelings hiding deeper meanings Nette interesting brilliant pen hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 5:48 AM
What a virtuous Grit! A marvel of a poem truly touching and inspiring! Thank you my dear nette!
Kayode Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 11:20 PM
Daily your pen becomes stronger,I really enjoyed this great work Nette.
Sivey Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 9:39 PM
Since the moon is my muse this line impressed upon me the most within your write, "That I feel her strong moon flushed with grace;" wow, that is a lovely line there! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem here this evening! You surely have written with words that entice and brighten! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:40 PM
There is such a passion of grit and power, and angst all mixed into one......another wow!!. Somehow, I do not think you would bow in defeat to anyone ...lol !!! ps........a great big thank you for your placement in the last contest.....such an honor, as I respect your own writings very much. Thank you!!
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work that you have penned in this one..Most people are both river and sleet..Interesting description..thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments encourage..Sara
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 4:38 PM
- Nette, thanks for another beautiful gem. - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gonza Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 2:56 PM
I like a woman who knows what she wants and is not carried away by dominance.This feisty and graceful poem celebrates the essence of good relationship! A masterpiece as expected. Got mail!
B Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 12:15 PM
Nette, lovely portrait of the inner forces at work in the female spirit. Thanks for sharing.
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