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Possessing a Huntress' Grit

In nightshade she rages in fumes And drives me to the edge of unrest Inside coal eyes, my breath exhumed Granting her to stew, I feel pressed. Dark tresses of fire keeps burning A passion that ignites a whirl... This vixen’s scold reeks like a sting But truth of her words were sincere. Enticed, I drink the spiced potion That bathes deep down inside of me; Possessing a huntress’ grit, she drones As my pride she melts, heavenly. My woman is both river and sleet Her quarter moon flushed with grace; Eclipsing my will, my defeat To accept a female's bold ways! Dr. Ram Mehta's Husbands Are In Heaven.. Contest by nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/4/2014 12:37:00 PM
Nicely done! Congrats on your win in the contest, Nette!!
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Date: 3/2/2014 6:40:00 PM
lol, she is one spicy dame, I can believe its heaven, congratulations on your win Nette
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Date: 3/2/2014 8:54:00 AM
Brilliantly expressed Nette. Congrats on your well deserved win - Connie
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Date: 3/2/2014 8:52:00 AM
So nice to see this one on the top of the winners list. Congrats.
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Date: 3/2/2014 4:33:00 AM
Congrats on the win Nette . No doubt, a great one is this. You are a Champion.
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Date: 3/2/2014 3:43:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on the fine win, nette
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:52:00 AM
Very powerful lines, a most unique interpretation of the contest. I like it very much.
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Date: 2/23/2014 3:26:00 PM
Not a husband yet but I'm in heaven reading this . Lovely poem nette. Daz
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Date: 2/23/2014 9:39:00 AM
OH....I Love the power and spirit of this one, Nette! On the prowl, are we??? ;) Hope you catch your prey...You've caught us with the charm of these words...Hugs
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Date: 2/22/2014 6:01:00 AM
a wealth of feelings hiding deeper meanings Nette interesting brilliant pen hugs
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Date: 2/22/2014 5:48:00 AM
What a virtuous Grit! A marvel of a poem truly touching and inspiring! Thank you my dear nette!
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Date: 2/21/2014 11:20:00 PM
Daily your pen becomes stronger,I really enjoyed this great work Nette.
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Date: 2/21/2014 9:39:00 PM
Since the moon is my muse this line impressed upon me the most within your write, "That I feel her strong moon flushed with grace;" wow, that is a lovely line there! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem here this evening! You surely have written with words that entice and brighten! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:40:00 PM
There is such a passion of grit and power, and angst all mixed into one......another wow!!. Somehow, I do not think you would bow in defeat to anyone ...lol !!! ps........a great big thank you for your placement in the last contest.....such an honor, as I respect your own writings very much. Thank you!!
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:39:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work that you have penned in this one..Most people are both river and sleet..Interesting description..thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments encourage..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:38:00 PM
- Nette, thanks for another beautiful gem. - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2014 2:56:00 PM
I like a woman who knows what she wants and is not carried away by dominance.This feisty and graceful poem celebrates the essence of good relationship! A masterpiece as expected. Got mail!
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Date: 2/21/2014 12:15:00 PM
Nette, lovely portrait of the inner forces at work in the female spirit. Thanks for sharing.
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