Valsa George Poet Limerick

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March.20.2024

Bite Size Poem No .83. Contest

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Please Don't Stare

After his hot booze, getting out of bed,
In a deeply timorous voice, he said;
“I am in my underwear.
It’s badly torn, please don’t stare."
Hearing this, the ladies in the room fled!

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Aparajita Bhattacharjee March 25, 2024 at 8:56 AM Hahaha!! I smell sarcasm there...The humor is a jibe. Please forgive me for tasting the humor this way.

Tonye George March 20, 2024 at 1:03 PM I melted Valsa. Lol. Can you write more of this genre? I love it. I wouldn't flee though.

Victor Buhagiar March 20, 2024 at 9:57 AM This is quite funny, but I consider you to be a decent person. In USA, I doubt if they run away. Lovely limerick.

Beryl Edmonds March 20, 2024 at 2:58 AM Very amusing Valsa, there’s a time to stand and stare, but never at a man in torn underwear… Beryl