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Pilot Dad

There once was a pilot from Alpine Who became a father in month nine Took her to the hangar Where inside he did bang ‘er But like his plane, didn’t pull out in time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/19/2011 11:58:00 AM
Funny as can be, a number one for me. Congratulations on your placement, Joe! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:16:00 PM
hahaha, GOOD and funny. I had missed this one somehow! Congratulations, JOE!
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Date: 1/18/2011 3:41:00 PM
Terrific Joe, just terrific. This is what the Limerick is all about. Many congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest....:)
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Date: 1/18/2011 12:17:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your super big win in the Limerick contest by Debbie... a great one my friend.. enjoy much success with luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations.Sara
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:13:00 AM
Hi Joe - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/16/2011 12:28:00 PM
This is very funny Joe...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Date: 1/16/2011 11:31:00 AM
Outrageously funny, Joe! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:01:00 AM
Both are good, the other was stronger, a traditional limerick requires a name and place in line 1 if you had just put a city that rhymed with nine in the first version you would have had the best one I'd read so far in form and in content. Here there should be a STRESS where the word "with" is line 1 and there is not so you go off meter. Light & Love..read my blog it can really help ;)
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Date: 1/15/2011 4:39:00 PM
really really good just think of a city which rhymes with NINE..the last line is perfection! Light & Love {or soup mail!]
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Date: 1/15/2011 3:28:00 PM
XXX-rated..Good luck if for the contest.Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 1/15/2011 1:48:00 PM
This is sooooo bad, really clever, made me really laugh. Good luck.
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