Pilot Dad

There once was a pilot from Alpine
Who became a father in month nine
Took her to the hangar
Where inside he did bang ‘er
But like his plane, didn’t pull out in time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 11:58 AM
Funny as can be, a number one for me. Congratulations on your placement, Joe! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:16 PM
hahaha, GOOD and funny. I had missed this one somehow! Congratulations, JOE!
Fraser Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 3:41 PM
Terrific Joe, just terrific. This is what the Limerick is all about. Many congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest....:)
Sweetheart Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Congrats Joe on your super big win in the Limerick contest by Debbie... a great one my friend.. enjoy much success with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations.Sara
Calhoun Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 8:13 AM
Hi Joe - Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC
Anderson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 12:28 PM
This is very funny Joe...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
Devonshire Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 11:31 AM
Outrageously funny, Joe! Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 5:01 AM
Both are good, the other was stronger, a traditional limerick requires a name and place in line 1 if you had just put a city that rhymed with nine in the first version you would have had the best one I'd read so far in form and in content. Here there should be a STRESS where the word "with" is line 1 and there is not so you go off meter. Light & Love..read my blog it can really help ;)
Guzzi Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 4:39 PM
really really good just think of a city which rhymes with NINE..the last line is perfection! Light & Love {or soup mail!]
Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 3:28 PM
XXX-rated..Good luck if for the contest.Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Milgate Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 1:48 PM
This is sooooo bad, really clever, made me really laugh. Good luck.
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