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Picking Apples -Rondelet

. Autumn apples Lean your ladder against the trees Autumn apples Rust and green creates a chapel God's bounty nestled in the leaves A taste of harvest scents the breeze Autumn apples! ________________________________________ Inspired By Dr. Ram Mehta's Contest "Rondelet Contest" By Carrie Richards

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/4/2011 2:21:00 PM

Ahh, now I wish we had some apple trees here! Thank you for making me imagine we did, though :) Really enjoyed this Carrie and thank you so much for all your inspiring comments in my poems :) You always make me smile, always a treat to see your name ^_^ I hope all is well with you and your lovely family :D hugs! I see this won, so congrats as well!

Kash Poet

Date: 8/1/2011 1:29:00 PM

A lovely poem here Carrie...congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2011 8:41:00 AM

hey Carrie, congrats on your win, David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/31/2011 8:47:00 PM

A lovely lilting piece. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 7/31/2011 8:24:00 PM

Carrie, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/31/2011 6:29:00 PM

pure of pictures in mind~~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~deserve this great placement~~smile for the win~~~*-*junjun

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 5:09:00 PM

Dear Carrie, Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 5:07:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on a fabulous fourth place win with these amazing entertaining words of poetry luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2011 4:02:00 PM

Enchanting as always, even with this short little form. You rock, Carrie. congratulations.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/31/2011 3:58:00 PM

Many congrats, Carrie : )

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/31/2011 2:25:00 PM

A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2011 2:04:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/28/2011 9:13:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/28/2011 2:46:00 PM

Wonderful creative writing today Carrie. I will be back soon to read more if the gremlins in PoetrySoup will permit. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2011 2:14:00 PM

Delightful rondelet, Carrie. Love those juicy tempting apples, though I don't recall any of my students ever bringing one to me. Truly a joyful entry for Dr. Ram's contest and I wish you success, dear. Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 7/28/2011 11:34:00 AM

Awesome Carrie ! I am a great longer of the firm feed...*smiles* and this write will go down in mine favz, I'm certain you mind not ! Ooooo apples, me and Noah's glee ! Have a fantastic week love ! Much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2011 9:37:00 PM

Thanks for the entry to my contest, Carrie

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/27/2011 8:45:00 PM

Carrie, you need 7 lines ( AbAabbA)

Nancy Jones

Date: 7/27/2011 8:34:00 PM

Golden delicious, or MacIntosh? Nice write, Carrie :)

Jl Sadberry

Date: 7/27/2011 7:07:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Sweeet Juicy Delicious Red Crisp Apples = Your Beauty Makes Them Seem & Sound, Sooo Good ~ My Dear Precious & Beautiful Carrie Richards == Very Lovely, Soft & Somewhat Enchanting, Painting My Dear.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/27/2011 6:59:00 PM

excellent write Carrie....with love.....old Jack