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Written on 12/12/2016.

Her supple and shapely silhouette rests submissively as the luster upon the soft satin sheets arouses sensual images of salaciousness beneath the sheen surface My empty yet enduring eyes slowly engage the darkness eager to embark upon the elusive lines energizing the elation as a sojourning moon entices her to endear Her excelling exuberance... exploited on exhalation exposing her explicitly, exemplifying the excerpt of an exonerated experience as the moonlight expires

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/15/2016 8:46:00 AM
Stunning poetry, the alliteration is off the charts! Congrats, CayCay sent me your way, I'm glad she did.
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 12/16/2016 5:43:00 AM
Thank you Paloma.
Date: 12/13/2016 4:13:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Alvin, congrats on your win.
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 12/13/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you Phil. Congrats on your win with your submission, Home - vivid, colorful imagery.
Date: 12/12/2016 8:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 12/13/2016 6:29:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. Congrats on your win as well with Quiet Storm.
Date: 12/12/2016 9:29:00 AM
Well done, Alvin! I am impressed by the alliteration in stanza 1 and 3. I am impressed by the absolutely breath grabbing complexities you so eloquently deliver. I hope this gets more reads. Nice to 'meet' you and your talent ... CayCay
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Alvin Llanos
Date: 12/12/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thank you CayCay. I was inspired after reading an example of the Acrostic-form; however, I wanted to be elusive in forming the word. Using alliteration on each stanza was my attempt to create a non-direct Acrostic-type poem - I'm still experimenting (and learning) the art. I'm glad you liked it.

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