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Peeping Tom - Bawdy

Two things old Peeping Tom knew for certain, Only perverts would peek through a curtain To see the forbidden, Kept carefully hidden And one day in prison he'd be hurtin’. written December 17, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/23/2021 1:30:00 AM

hurt'n - rhymes with curtain and certain. This is beautifully creative!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/23/2021 8:10:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. I guess I was "searchin'" for a good one.

Terry Flood

Date: 12/18/2021 4:24:00 PM

TOM! DO NOT DROP THAT SOAP!!! Fun write, Milt. Terry

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/18/2021 6:33:00 PM

Indeed, do not! Thanks for the reminder, Terry. I think I already shifted to body wash!!!!

Charles Messina

Date: 12/18/2021 5:01:00 AM

LOL..what comes around goes around. Love this, Milton. Happy Holiday my friend!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/18/2021 9:11:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie. Happy Holidays to you, too! Thanks for your visit.

Valsa George

Date: 12/17/2021 8:43:00 PM

Beautiful limerick....! Tom has figured out correctly...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/17/2021 9:02:00 PM

Thank you a whole lot, Valsa, for visiting my poem and leaving your comment. I appreciate it.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2021 5:00:00 PM

ha ha ha good one Milton:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/17/2021 6:31:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. They come to me every now and then, so I just pass them on. I miss your really good limericks!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/17/2021 1:22:00 PM

Good one Milton, seems we have perverts on our mind lol. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/17/2021 1:40:00 PM

I don't know why, Tom. But this one just pushed into my mind through the window, and I decided to tell him where to go!