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Peekaboo Sexyku

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This is my first haiku. I hope it is correct!.You must keep in mind, this is a sexy-ku.

Staring at the moon
An intoxicating view
A slice of heaven

by Daniel Turner

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/14/2017 1:37:00 PM

Indeed, some nights moon is a great companion.....

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/9/2017 8:39:00 PM

OH DEAR!!! I also had to read the comments to get this...and now...dear dear. :)

Carole Duet

Date: 3/5/2017 7:23:00 PM

Well!! I didn't realize what this was really about until I read some of the comments. I was wondering why the title was "...Sexyku". Now I know. lol Good sexyku haiku.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 2/28/2017 9:11:00 AM

so much said, so few words

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2017 9:40:00 AM

LOL! The view of God so wonderful, so graciously given. Nice mixed haiku

Phillip Garcia

Date: 2/26/2017 6:50:00 PM

I'm going to re-ask my question about the moon to you now :)

Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/26/2017 7:56:00 PM

Ohhh. I see. Thank you for clearing it up, DT

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/26/2017 7:43:00 PM

See answer on original question:) It all depends on the poem.

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/26/2017 11:11:00 AM

Nicely symbolical ... A7 ...

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/26/2017 4:02:00 PM

Thank you, Probir:)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/24/2017 11:08:00 AM

Such a lovely sexyku! I can't believe that this is your first haiku! You have already mastered this form! A-7 and good luck in the contest! Hugs. Pandita

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/25/2017 7:52:00 AM

You're just too sweet:) Thank you so much, Pandita.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/23/2017 1:35:00 PM

You did really well for a first haiku, Danny! A mooning sexyku! ~ Regards // paul

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/25/2017 7:51:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. I changed it a hundred times. I couldn't figure out which sounded better. I kept swapping the first and last lines.

Darren White

Date: 2/23/2017 1:18:00 PM

Nice moon :D

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/25/2017 7:49:00 AM

Thank you, Darren:)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/22/2017 7:52:00 AM

lol good first haiku; a little dash (cut) after the 2nd line will work wonders - good luck in the contest, and thanks for your comment on my work

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/25/2017 7:49:00 AM

Thank you, Charlotte:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2017 1:00:00 AM

I see. hahaha

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/25/2017 7:46:00 AM

Thank you, again, Andrea:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/21/2017 7:37:00 PM

You dirty old man, good stuff DT...

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/25/2017 7:45:00 AM

I guess my secret's out:) Thank you Charlie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2017 3:34:00 PM

this is wonderful. I sure am enjoying the sexyku!!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/21/2017 5:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. This is my first haiku:)

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/21/2017 8:17:00 AM

What a moon to view ... a creation of beauty ...

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/21/2017 5:02:00 PM

Absolutely! Thank you, Probir:)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/21/2017 12:07:00 AM

Oh, I love the sexy view of the moon, Daniel... well done! I was trying to write a 'sexyku' but I guess I wasn't in a sexy mood today. I think I'll miss this one. Lots of luck in the contest! Hugs, Rhonda

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/21/2017 5:02:00 PM

Thank you, Rhonda and I'm sure you'll come up with something:)